Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rhinnal/Legends

Rhinnal/Legends

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 04:20, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: *audible creaking noises* be kind to me, I'm old
• Word count at nomination time: 2166 words (272 introduction, 1808 body, 86 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR, WP:AST

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Objections

Mor

• I believe some images could be spread throughout the article.
  • Added. Cade Calrayn 02:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)
• Early history should be sectioned a bit more, it has 6 paragraphs when sections should only have 2-3 or sometimes 4 paragraphs. Mor9347 ^(Talk) 04:29, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
• The end of the first paragraph in Early history is unsourced Mor9347 ^(Talk) 04:54, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Done. Will work on images. Cade Calrayn 04:10, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Uh oh, he's back. :P First off, per Mor with more images, but also current ones should be enlarged, and the first image has a white border that should be removed. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:47, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 02:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)
    • Images are still closer to monobook size. We average around 300px for most widths these days. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:27, 12 July 2025 (UTC)
      • Done. Cade Calrayn 21:06, 24 July 2025 (UTC)

Dani

• The top quote seems like it's fit perfectly in Locations. Is there another quote for Locations/Top? NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 11:19, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Added another quote to Locations; the top one is the best overall. Cade Calrayn 02:58, 20 June 2025 (UTC)

Imp

• How do we know that the correct Coruscant and the Core Worlds image is the one in Rhinnal's entry and not the one in Ralltiir's?
  • Ralltiir has been depicted in other sources and it looks significantly different from the Core Worlds image; Ralltiir isn't an ice world. I'll check the Far Orbit Project for additional images though. Cade Calrayn 02:33, 18 June 2025 (UTC)
• The Canon article's BTS has more relevant info that should be added onto this article as well.
• Please note the authors of the 1stm and the 1st.
• The release dates for the Adventure Journal issues and for Coruscant and the Core Worlds are self-sourcing, and 2008 is also noted as the copyright date for The Force Unleashed Campaign Guide. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:49, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
  • All done. Cade Calrayn 02:39, 18 June 2025 (UTC)

spookly

• That the atmosphere is "Type I" is infobox-exclusive (body only mentions breathable).
• Galactic Basic Standard is also infobox-exclusive.
• "In 22 BBY, the Allied Tion Historical Society's..."—generally, pretty much all of the HNN stuff requires a GrS date conversion like here for any BBY inclusion in prose since those themselves don't support it outright.
• Tython, Ord Mantell, and Ruan should have context as a planet or a world.
  • Done.
• I spy Jedi vs. Sith in the sources, which does have an IU book and is mentioned as a 40 ABY compendium like other diegetic works in other SAs. Just wanted to briefly check to see what the nature of Rhinnal's mention was in that because it's likely eligible for a similar note. It seems like Platt's Smuggler's Guide also has an IU equivalent.
  • Added JvS, but Rhinnal's mention in Platt is in the OOU character development section as a possible homeworld, so not applicable. Cade Calrayn 23:11, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
• Regarding the quote caption in locations; ending punctuation in quote attributions is generally disallowed since they're not allowed to be full sentences
• Regarding the two links to characters in the top quote attribution; would be unneeded as both are linked elsewhere below
• Does Episode I Adventures 1: Search for the Lost Jedi support a flatcite to 33 BBY without additional referencing? I took a quick peek at the book's page and it seems to say it was 32 BBY. But even if it was 33 BBY, curious if the book itself has that somewhere in there, as its fairly unusual for a narrative book to self-support its dates.
• I also wanted to check up on the 27 ABY flatcite for Star by Star's date; we've had some nominations in the past come through from that and most of them include The Essential Reader's Companion date notes.
• Regarding Mara Jade Skywalker's linking in the quote caption, it would be standard to include some form of context for her in the quote attribution if thats the only place she's introduced, like a rank or role.
• There's definitely room for a BTS image perhaps of the Adventure Journal cover or of any of the other milestones media mentioned there.
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 23:11, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
• Its generally not standard to include publishers for children's books (in this case Scholastic) without referential need. I also don't think the month is needed there as its the only 1999 source being discussed.
• Its standard to introduce a link to both the series and the issue when referring to magazines, in this case something like "fifth issue of the Star Wars Adventure Journal" includes both, but as long as both links are somehow included that works too.—spookywilloww^talk 17:05, 26 September 2025 (UTC)
  • Tackled most of these, but I pulled my back and am going to go lay down. Will try to fix the planets & BTS image later. Cade Calrayn 22:21, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

Comments

• If I recall correctly, I checked the abridged audiobooks already, but i'll double check them. Cade Calrayn 04:21, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
• Additional sources: —DKS MaXoO (talk) 23:36, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Star Wars: Empire at War (Cut content)
  • The New Jedi Order: Vector Prime (Galaxy map only)
  • The New Jedi Order: Dark Tide I: Onslaught (Galaxy map only)
  • The New Jedi Order: Dark Tide II: Ruin (Galaxy map only)
  • Shadows of the Empire Sourcebook — p. 110
  • Star Wars Encyclopedia — pp. 67, 228, 250
  • The Essential Chronology — p. 167
  • Galaxy Map Poster — Star Wars Gamer 5
  • The Official Star Wars Fact File 1 Galaxy Map Poster
  • "Jedi Mind Tricks" — Star Wars Gamer 8
  • The New Jedi Order Sourcebook — p. 154
  • Star Wars Roleplaying Game Revised Core Rulebook — pp. 207, 370
  • Making a Full Recovery on Wizards.com (original site is defunct)
  • "Making the Map" — Star Wars Insider 65
  • Galaxy Map Poster — Star Wars Insider 65
  • The Official Star Wars Fact File 101 MAN 9-12: Manufacturers
  • The New Essential Guide to Weapons and Technology
  • Jedi vs. Sith: The Essential Guide to the Force — p. 72
  • The Essential Guide to Warfare — p. 119
  • Possibly also in: Star Wars: Darth Vader: A 3-D Reconstruction Log

Vote to strike objection (Inq only)

1. For Mor's, hit 16 days. Pinged 6 days ago with no reply.—spookywilloww^talk 22:18, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 22:19, 6 July 2025 (UTC)