Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Larry (second nomination)

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Larry

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 21:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Larry, from the planet Brooklyn.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

  1. "I once knew a man with three eyes, purple fur, clinical depression, and a nose like Wario." "Ooh, what did you call him?" "…Larry." Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. You forgot to mention his flashlight in the equipment section. :P JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 04:04, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
  3. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:08, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  4. Short for Larry, apparently OtterSurf (talk) 10:23, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:47, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:55, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 22:19, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Can the timeline reference really be used to source all of the first half of the first paragraph?
    • Good catch, fixed.
  • I think the physical description in the P&T should elaborate on the position of his eyes, how two were in his face while one was in an upper stalk. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:59, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The distinct colour on his arms and foot could be mentioned as well, is there anything to indicate that they are hairy too? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:17, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I've been treating it all as skin, since the model sheet just has the label "flesh." - Cwedin(talk) 02:25, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I know I've voted support but I just noticed that Larry's tribe should be linked in affiliations. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:57, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Can you mention his gender in the intro?
    • Done.
  • Do you think it's worth mentioning the blanket in the equipment section? JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 19:48, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:19, 1 October 2021 (UTC)