Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kale Roshuir

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Kale Roshuir

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's ok, you didn't need her anyway.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:48, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote I know that feel bro IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 20:55, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote I'd buy him a beer. Menkooroo (talk) 00:17, August 20, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Plagueis327 (talk) 00:27, August 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 19:50, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ~SavageBOB sig 04:28, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 07:18, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  • This might be a sofixit, but his infobox says green eyes, and the personality and traits says blue. From looking at the image, it appears they are green eyes, but not actually having the comic in question I'll leave that to the nominator to fix. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:52, August 7, 2012 (UTC)
Poor guy
  • File:DeenaShan1.jpg will need a reupload with speech bubbles per the Image policy.
    • That's one of Redemption's scans and he's no longer around. I can upload another if you want, but the quality's gonna drop dramatically. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:10, August 15, 2012 (UTC)
      • I hate to be a stickler, but the image policy doesn't include any clauses about image quality, so yeah, a reupload is needed. If you move the speech bubble text from the new one into the empty bubbles of the old one you can probably keep the same quality; it's been done before. Menkooroo (talk) 02:41, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is there an infobox-worthy image of him without a hat on? Menkooroo (talk) 21:53, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • Can you indicate that Kalist IV is a planet earlier in the lead?
  • The use of "rebel forces" to describe the Jabiim group is not incorrect, but it's a bit confusing, since "Rebel" so often means Rebel Alliance in canon. Would rebellious work? Or some other synonym?
  • Does the prisoner mentioned actually appear in the story? Might be worth giving that person a unique article rather than simply linking to prison.
    • Turns out she already had one. Changed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:53, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • Ditto his pilot -- as a unique character, might be worth giving them an article.
    • The pilot doesn't seem notable. He's in a flight suit, with his back to us in one frame and has no dialogue. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:53, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
      • I'd err on the side of giving him an article, but I won't oppose over it. ~SavageBOB sig 04:28, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
  • The word "waited" or "waiting" appears three or four times in close succession in the "Reunion" section. Maybe mix it up a bit?
  • Can you indicate who illustrated him, at least in his first appearance? The artist is just as much a part of character creation as the writer with a comic. That's it! ~SavageBOB sig 13:07, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
    • Good point. Added for first appearance. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:53, September 7, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:28, September 14, 2012 (UTC)