Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Holdan

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Holdan

Nominated by: Sol Pacificus^Firestorm 11:06, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Nomination comments: This was a good article nomination that went over the word-limit.

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Imperators II^(Talk) 11:21, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Looks good to me! Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:40, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Cevan (talk) 23:28, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
Seriously, kudos to people who write RPG articles. The number of possible situations one has to play through to get all possible outcomes is just exhausting for me to think about. MasterFred^(Whatever) 00:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Hehe, I really was reloading game files like dozens of times for each character to get all possible dialogue options down. :P But then I discovered this which made things much easier, being a complete record of every dialogue as well as all game stats of characters, though for some time being as apprehensive as I was, I was still double-check through my own reloads. I thanked the dude that made that guide profusely, but sadly his KotOR 2 one is still a work in progress. Sol Pacificus^Firestorm 01:34, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Just letting you know that Dancer (erroneous link removed during my review) refers to Mara Jade's astromech droid. Otherwise good work. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:07, September 10, 2017 (UTC)
Meant to vote on this when I added the audio files and totally spaced. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 18:14, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

~~One small thing, could you mention that the bounty was 300 credits in the body of the article? The amount is still accurate even if it's never claimed.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:11, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
- Done. I wasn't sure if that was the best place to put it though, or if it should've been worded "300 credit bounty" instead. Sol Pacificus^Firestorm 13:32, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Are there no images to be had for the Biography? There's certainly enough room for one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:49, October 12, 2017 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, for whatever reason my PC can no longer take screenshots correctly for games. Whenever I do, the picture always come out as a black screen, and I do not know how to fix this. Any way you can help me with this? Sol Pacificus^Firestorm 03:12, October 12, 2017 (UTC)
  - I do not have the ability to help you with this, as I do not have access to KOTOR. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:41, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
  - Also, for the record, what you're referring to is a built-in anti-piracy measure in most modern computers. I've experienced the same thing trying to get screenshots from DVDs and Blu-rays. You need a special program to take screenshots, which is not something I have access to. Someone else would need to help you out. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:47, November 21, 2017 (UTC)

Have you checked the Prima guide to see if he is mentioned? I have the guide to the second game and a lot of the side quests are referenced in it.
Could you include one of the lines of dialogue from Revan's companions as the BTS quote?
I don't think it is necessary to have direct quotations for each of the party members in the BTS. I would note which quotes take precedence over others and give a brief description of them in prose.
The CSWE states that Revan convinced Holdan to drop the bounty, so the Game Mechanics section should be revised to reflect this. This should also be mentioned in the BTS.
The CSWE states that he was active in the years leading up to the Great Sith War, which isn't accurate based on the events of the game. This error should be noted in the BTS.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:08, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Nominator has been absent since October 12, and the nomination is thus eligible for removal with objections idle for more than a week. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:39, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 22:41, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:42, November 21, 2017 (UTC)