Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Gurion Silizzar

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Gurion Silizzar

  • Nominated by: Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:25, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restless I feel my mind wander...

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)

Support

  1. Good work, Chack. Just watch your linking. :) JangFett Talk 00:00, September 5, 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 11:08, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 00:29, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Watch out for "once agains"! - —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 11:29, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:38, October 9, 2009 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:46, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
    • Intro: "mad Doctor Cornelius Evazan" seems kinda POVish.
      • Removed. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:57, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
    • BTS could be longer. Mention who wrote Doctor Death and his CSWE entry. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:06, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
      • Addressed, I think. Doubt that there is any other info present on him. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:57, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:46, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

  • One thing: In the main quote, it says, "No, I don't want money for you." I don't have the book, so it may or may not be correct, but shouldn't it be "from you"? Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 02:29, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
    • "For you". Like, turning him in for a bounty. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:41, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
      • Context of the quote would seem to indicate otherwise, but whatever. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 11:08, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
  • If you can, please link Evazan's lab and whatever else you might find appropriate. CC7567 (talk) 00:29, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
    • Good idea. I will get around to creating those articles soon. Chack Jadson (Talk) 13:13, September 20, 2009 (UTC)