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Gor Koresh
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:33, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: So this is the first FAN I've done of a thing that we don't specifically see die or get destroyed. Thanks goes to the editors that helped me with images and sources I don't have in my collection, because none of my Mando noms would've happened without me pestering other users on the Discord server for help with them :P
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Support
- Review finished through Discord. Samonic
09:00, 12 July 2022 (UTC) 
Nice work! OOM 224 19:28, 12 July 2022 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:37, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:30, 28 August 2022 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 16:43, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
- DFaceG (talk) 20:31, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:32, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
Object
Samonic
- (Review note: I removed some duplicate links and did a copy-edit after that.)
- Managed to find another myself, thanks.
Species go before gender in the intro. (I checked Valin Hess to confirm this :P)- I hate this practice, but changed.
- I do too, I hate precedent in general, but at some point someone would point it out. Samonic 12:13, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
- I do too, I hate precedent in general, but at some point someone would point it out. Samonic
- I hate this practice, but changed.
I'm not really sure that quote fits in equipment. Did Koresh use Beskar in his clothing or in his exploits?Samonic 09:23, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- Beskar is technically an "object" Koresh likes to track down, so I thought it'd fit in. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:19, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
About the last image of the BTS, wouldn't it make more sense to say "John Rosengrant" on the set of Koresh's arena with Jon Favreau? I say this because BTS is OOU, and it would make more sense to mention the actor there.- Makes sense. Done. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:18, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
Unidentified Outer Rim planet (Carnita arena) must be linked.Samonic 18:08, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
- I didn't realise it had an article. Linked now. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:18, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
OOM
RE: the species gender precedent that Samonic (correctly) pointed out: I know this was a thing that the review boards objected upon in the past, but the AC has largely agreed that it works either way, so the order here is just up to you the nominator.- Ok I remember that for the future. Thanks!
Would be nice to have the images enlarged, and on default width, the Imagecat is interfering with the Appearances list.- Maybe it's me, but I feel like the default image px has had to be increased gradually since my beginnings in 2018.
- Heh, yeah I feel that too.
- Maybe it's me, but I feel like the default image px has had to be increased gradually since my beginnings in 2018.
When used as compound adjectives, units of measurements should be hyphenated, meaning it should be "1.73-meter-tall" instead in P&T.- Fixed.
"brown under-clothing with brown gloves a white sport coat, including a symbol of his arena, intended to give an air of respectability" — Might want to fix this bit. I'd copy-edit it myself, but I'm not familiar with the sources.- How does this look?
For magazine and comics, individual issues should be presented in prose in this kind of format: "the ninety-ninth issue of the Star Wars Insider magazine"/"the Star Wars Insider magazine's 100th issue." The order can be switched as necessary, but values under 100 should be spelled out.I don't see the need to mention Disney+'s launch at the end of the "Identity" section.OOM 224 16:00, 12 July 2022 (UTC)- Very well, removed.
"As the injured Gamorrean then evaded death" — it's best to avoid ambiguous wording such as this. Would something like "struggled to survive" work here?OOM 224 16:17, 12 July 2022 (UTC)- Makes sense, done. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:21, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 23:39, 28 August 2022 (UTC)