Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 89

EduCorps Meeting 89 will be held in the Riddle Family cemetery at 7:00 PM UTC / 3:00 PM ET on April 17, 2022. Please send an owl with notes if you are unable to attend.

The CAs That Lived, Come to Die

Bone of the author, unknowingly given

• Racsan break (diff • review)
• BTL-S3B Y-wing starfighter (diff • review)
• Republic Office of Criminal Investigations/Legends (diff • review)

Flesh of the nominator, willingly given

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Crystalplas—Abridged audiobooks for both novels to check for appearance, Obroa-skai context.
  • Audiobooks checked and added, context provided. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:08, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
• Trade Tariff Service—Date for Battle of Corellia can be established and added + redirect
  • Both done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:08, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
• Tapani triangle—Unsourced BtS, missing |dishes= field, seems to cover a lot of ingredient information better suited for the slider's main article, due to lack of relevance with the triangles themselves.—spookywilloww^talk 18:45, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
  • All sorted. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:29, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
• Yyeger sugar—Missing audiobook, unsourced BtS, from the way it's worded at the moment, seems like it's noted Trene could consume it, and they have a confirmed species.—spookywilloww^talk 18:45, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed the BTS, proceeded as discussed via Discord for the species, and no mention of it in the audiobook. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:29, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
• Ubuuga caviar—Link in caption, unsourced and some irrelevant information in BtS, which needs a comic release date and sources overall. Last sentence fails to mention relevance to the caviar, in terms of sharing a name.—spookywilloww^talk 18:45, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
  • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:29, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
• Strained keebadas—153 words, needs sectioning removed; inconsistent capitalization of Keebadas, unsourced BtS.—spookywilloww^talk 18:45, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
  • All should be done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:42, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
• Parnax — 165 words, intro needed.—spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  • 163 words now. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Perry
  • Abridged audiobook should be checked for mention.
  • It shouldn't be too difficult to work in the individuals linked in the quote attribution into the article proper.—spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Both done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Quinze — same as Perry.—spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done, though Quinze isn't mentioned in the audiobook. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Precht
  • Article should specify in words what the "typical" uniform was— the colors of the articles of clothings and their types as is in the photo.
  • Duplicate information about wanting to impress Antilles.
  • Context for who the GCW was against can be established.
  • A few linking issues/Consecutive referencing issues.—spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All fixed. As for the uniform, the source in question literally shows the uniform and identifies it as the standard uniform. We wouldn't include the individual details like helmet and goggles, etc for Stormtrooper armor as a reference. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:38, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Also for clarity, 1st card talks about him wanting to make a good impression with Antilles and the crew while second talks about him wanting to impress Antilles specifically. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:33, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Ram
  • Geonosis battle and the novel's events can be dated.
  • Referencing cleanup to base the corresponding the databank information to Ram.—spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Terrin Sandafar—173 words in body; needs sectioning.—spookywilloww^talk 07:21, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Sorted OOM 224 08:34, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
• Santiago
  • Only 73 body words; remove sectioning.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • BtS cites.—spookywilloww^talk 07:21, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Skwelli—170 words in body, needs sectioning.—spookywilloww^talk 07:21, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • With the sectioning added from below, 257 words.—spookywilloww^talk 04:20, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
• Dannis Veriga—144 body words, remove intro.—spookywilloww^talk 07:21, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
• Coruscant Security Special Investigation Panel — I doubt the relevant in-game message mentions things like "Galactic City," and the excerpt of the message here doesn't directly support some of the info in the article, so it should be verified and extrapolations should be removed/manual citations should be added where necessary OOM 224 12:14, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Should be done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:58, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Did it actually appear? In any case, the first BTS sentence shouldn't be cited to another mission. OOM 224 13:04, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
• Providence-class Carrier — received an update and now exceeds 250 words. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 05:15, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
• Loci Rosen
  • 1983 Topps Return of the Jedi Album Stickers, this album which currently doesn't have an article, and Star Wars Kids 19 (cover) also use his image to depict Ackbar. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:34, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All updated. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:24, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
• Star Wars: Imperial Commando
  • Came across this article and the larger interview which has information not noted in the article, including the concept idea by Kevin Schmitt, some of the proposed story elements and that there were rumours at the time of a sequel. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:31, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Star Wars: Rebel Commando should probably have it's own article as well, which would result in a redlink here. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:31, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
• Rage (Lancer-class) — Specifications and their references should be revamped to match the current precedent e.g. Notes instead of flat references to unrelated sources. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:34, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
• Green/Aura — Specifications and their references should be revamped to match the current precedent e.g. Notes instead of flat references to unrelated sources. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:36, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
• Green/Besh — Specifications and their references should be revamped to match the current precedent e.g. Notes instead of flat references to unrelated sources. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:36, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
• Tyrral — {{SWGcite}} required. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:36, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Blood of the reviewer, forcibly taken,

Expand as needed.

• Membership discussion. 1358 ^(Talk) 07:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Answering the Dark Mark

Proud Death Eaters

MORSMORDRE! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:04, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

1. Possibilis apparere OOM 224 19:40, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
2. Kill the spare! 1358 ^(Talk) 14:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
3. ExpelliEducorpsus Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 19:03, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Secretly working for Dumbledore

1. Forgot about Pesach, will leave notes. And now... Piertotum Locomotor! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:23, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
3. Imprisoned in Moody's Trunk Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:25, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:51, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
6. I only accept My Immortal as Canon to Harry Potter Fan26 (Talk) 16:33, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
7. Zed42 (talk) 12:51, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
8. Ironically I will be unavailable as I’m watching the new Harry Potter film. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:54, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Elaborate backstory explaining why you're working for Dumbledore

Dumbledore once lent Macaroni a cup of frog spleen

• Probe Providence and Commando, spare the rest. Kill the Y-wing, keep the other probed stuff. OOM gets my vote for anything else. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:28, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• Notes per J-Mac. Vote goes to OOM. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Probe new unfixed items. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
• Support new membership. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:55, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

Mad Eye Manoof

• Probe Investigation Panel, Providence and Commando. Kill the Y-wing and keep the other probed stuff. Support the membership. The Force using Pasta Masta gets my vote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• Per Shay. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:25, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• Votes per OOM Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:51, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

Fan works for Dumbledore

• Per shay, though i might be making an appearance Fan26 (Talk) 04:31, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Zed

• Also per Shay. Zed42 (talk) 12:51, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

• Notes per Shay. Support new membership. Ecks can have my vote. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:54, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• OOM 224
• Xd1358
• Supreme Emperor
• Fan26
• Ayrehead02

Articles that kept Comprehensive article status

• Racsan break
• BTL-S3B Y-wing starfighter
• Republic Office of Criminal Investigations/Legends

Articles placed on probation

• Coruscant Security Special Investigation Panel
• Providence-class Carrier
• Star Wars: Imperial Commando
• Rage (Lancer-class)
• Green/Aura
• Green/Besh
• Tyrral

Articles spared from probation

• Crystalplas
• Trade Tariff Service
• Tapani triangle
• Yyeger sugar
• Ubuuga caviar
• Strained keebadas
• Parnax
• Perry
• Quinze
• Precht
• Ram
• Terrin Sandafar
• Santiago
• Skwelli
• Dannis Veriga
• Loci Rosen

Notes

• Commander Code-8 does paperwork and schedules Meeting 90.
• Log