Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 26

EduCorps Meeting 26, ode to the Phantoms, will occur on Saturday, June 27th, 2015 at 7 PM ET in the #Wookieepedia-educorps channel on IRC. If you are an EduCorps-only member and cannot attend, please leave notes saying how you will vote on the articles under review.

Phantoms

Intransigent

• ABP-980 bio-light panel
• Bacon
• Balith
• Booombaaa Boombaa Bombashella
• Chiggnash
• GRGC-800 grav mill
• Hiding Cube SCT-1000
• InstaMist generator
• Intense Performer
• Into the Maw: Black Holes, Egos, and Other Forces that Devour Lives
• J'aahn
• Unidentified Gungan master songwriter
• Vaenrood
• Zhaboka

Invisible

• Band Light
  • This article needs to include a commanders and crew section.
  • The full release date is not self-sourcing.
  • The lead quote makes it sound like the someone recorded the events in a log/transmission? If this is the case, it should be mentioned.
• BARC speeder (two-person)
  • "The speeder's only appearance is in the licenced LEGO Star Wars Clone Troopers Battle Pack toyset, released in 2007 as part of their Revenge of the Sith toy line." This is not technically an apeparance, and the speeder's mention in the visual dictionary kind of throws out the "only" as well.
  • "The speeder model is not named, but it appears similar to the BARC speeder that was used during the Clone Wars, with the two main differences mentioned above." If it is not named, then it should have the conjecture tag and not use "BARC speeder" in the article. Otherwise, this sentence needs to change.
  • The article should state how many blaster cannons it has and where they are located.
  • The article mentions a gunner, but does not mention the gunner's weapon. Is he just carrying it or is it a part of the bike?
• Barlen
  • The introduction is too short.
  • The skin color in the body disagrees with the skin color in the infobox.
  • His eyes do not appear black in color to me.
  • From my experience with TOR vendors, I'm fairly sure this guy has another line of dialog.
  • His close proximity to Nem'ro's palace should be noted in the bio.
  • Each section should have more variety than just starting "Barlen..."
    • All done except the quote. Over 250 so another one for GAN. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)
• Crombach Nebula
  • It was partially updated, but more needs to be done in relation to its mention in the Warfare Author's Cut.
  • Some other information was also added to the article, someone should check out the information and determine if it is valid and complete.
• Nintuk
  • The wanted poster says: "By proclamation of his Imperial majesty Emperor Palpatine"which makes it sound like Palpatine ordered the bounty.
  • Also, the mention of Palpatine narrows down the era somewhat. The article should note that she was wanted at some point during Palpatine's reign and give a properly sourced range of years for his reign.
  • The article should mention that her wanted poster was used in the Guild handbook.
  • The full release date needs another source.
• TK-934
  • Reference two does not provide sufficient information to source the 19 BBY and 1 BBY dates.
  • There is information in the quote that is not in the article. The rest of the entry should be checked for additional context/info.
• Tig Fromm's starship—The era is exclusive to the infobox.
• Ton E'rau
  • Reference one does not provide sufficient information to source the 19 BBY and 1 BBY dates.
  • There is information in the quote on TK-934 that is not in the article. The rest of the entry should be checked for additional context/info.
• Wolga—Reference three does not provide sufficient information to source the 19 BBY and 1 BBY dates.

Discussion

Attendance

Hang around

1. No problem Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:27, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
2. Probably.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:28, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Put on a sheet

Whispers

Minutes

• Log

Attendance

• Corellian Premier
• Exiledjedi
• Xd1358

CA status removed

• ABP-980 bio-light panel
• Bacon
• Balith
• Booombaaa Boombaa Bombashella
• Chiggnash
• GRGC-800 grav mill
• Hiding Cube SCT-1000
• InstaMist generator
• Intense Performer
• Into the Maw: Black Holes, Egos, and Other Forces that Devour Lives
• J'aahn
• Unidentified Gungan master songwriter

CA status kept

• Vaenrood
• Zhaboka

Articles placed on probation

• Band Light
• Barlen
• Crombach Nebula
• Nintuk
• TK-934
• Tig Fromm's starship
• Ton E'rau
• Wolga

Articles spared probation

• BARC speeder (two-person)

Responsibilities

• Exiledjedi volunteered for paperwork.
• 501st dogma is responsible for scheduling Meeting 27.