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Zaloriis system/Legends
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:51, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Beating Imp to this one cause GB
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Zalori system :P Imperators II(Talk) 13:34, 16 May 2021 (UTC)- OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:38, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 20:08, 19 May 2021 (UTC) - DwartiiDelver (talk) 23:59, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:48, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Since the star system infobox does not have separate fields for flora and fauna, we generally try and restrict the usage of species field for sentient species only. Please implement this and remove the listing of the fauna from the article. In addition, Humans are immigrated species to pretty much everywhere but Coruscant.- I thought it was overkill anyway and didn't think to compare it. Done.
"Vader's search for the hidden Rebel base had brought him to Zaloriis," is this accurate? Vader's reason for visiting the system conflicts what's on the Executor FA.Imperators II(Talk) 11:11, 16 May 2021 (UTC)- Both are correct. The objectives section for the level describes Vader as getting desperate in his search for the Rebels, so he latches on to the vague clue of Zaloriis' tribute going unpaid and decides to stop by. I've updated the article to include the tribute bit and will do so for the Executor shortly.
Is there a reason why you list the system's affiliation to the Empire after the Rebel Alliance one in the infobox? From the article it seems to me the reverse would be more appropriate. Also please add the corresponding categorization to the article.Imperators II(Talk) 11:12, 16 May 2021 (UTC)- OOM did that in his copy edit haha. I think the logic behind it is that it was an Imperial system first, then had a Rebel uprising which was crushed. Also TIL we don't have a Rebel systems category. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:09, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Actually, upon a second look at the article, there's nothing actually indicating that the system itself, not just the planet Zaloriis, was affiliated with either of the factions. For my own system articles, I'm only assigning affiliations to them when they're actually placed on alignment maps or are explicitly identified as affiliated with someone by sources. Imperators II(Talk) 13:15, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Fair enough, there's nothing in the game indicating it either. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:28, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Actually, upon a second look at the article, there's nothing actually indicating that the system itself, not just the planet Zaloriis, was affiliated with either of the factions. For my own system articles, I'm only assigning affiliations to them when they're actually placed on alignment maps or are explicitly identified as affiliated with someone by sources. Imperators II(Talk) 13:15, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- OOM did that in his copy edit haha. I think the logic behind it is that it was an Imperial system first, then had a Rebel uprising which was crushed. Also TIL we don't have a Rebel systems category. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:09, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
Dwartii
Is there some reason "Rebel base" links to Alliance High Command rather than Echo Base?DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:44, 19 May 2021 (UTC)- That was added in a copy edit, changed it to Echo Base as that's explicitly where the Rebels where at that time in the game. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:30, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:16, 25 May 2021 (UTC)