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Yuv Kal Zaer

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I think centuries before the War against Zakuul is more accurate than the Galactic War, as the codex entry in question is written as if it's taking place during KOTET and therefore the former conflict, not the latter.
- I went with the Galactic War, as that's a definitive name, and also it's easier to discuss the context of it versus the Zakuul war, and since we're talking centuries (likely millennia) beforehand, the time difference is irrelevant IMO.
In the report Kal Zaer wrote, they said "Our master designer should be honored for this significant improvement over the last three test environments." I think it's worth noting that they said this in the article, as it's closer to their actual opinion rather than a summary of the test, and therefore relevant to Kal Zaer IMO.
- Done.
Also, do you think "master designer" in the above quote refers to Vel Jyc Boer or some other designer, and therefore should be linked to? All of the Iokath history codex entries speak in glowing terms about some master designer, then Boer's is his depressed ramblings about their cultural stagnation. It's ambigous if he's the same master designer referred to elsewhere Fan26 (Talk) 01:56, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Per discussion, there's a Master Designers Council, so we can't say that. Cade Calrayn 03:24, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

~~The word "Iokath" is infobox-exclusive. I think you could just fit it somewhere in the first sentence~~ OOM 224 16:37, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
~~Also, the article could use a category for their occupation~~ OOM 224 16:39, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:53, 30 August 2021 (UTC)