Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Wilhuff Tarkin's apartment

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Wilhuff Tarkin's apartment

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 05:43, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
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Support

1. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:18, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
2. What an unusual collection of sources Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:23, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:08, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
4. DFaceG (talk) 07:16, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:49, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• I see you linked a canon page as the apartment's canon counterpart. How do we really know that it's the same apartment? Tarkin could have very well owned several apartments on Coruscant.
  • Per precedent with a GAN, Tagge protoblade, the canon page is linked to a Legends counterpart that isn't 1:1 exact. As such, I think the 2 apartments are similar enough that they can be linked to each other. Dentface (talk) 00:06, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Context for the Death Star. "battlestation" will do.
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:06, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Please introduce some variation when referring to Tarkin. "the Grand Moff," "the Moff." Samonic ^(Talk) 10:24, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:06, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Does the Topps card really say that Tarkin shared his new assignment with his wife in 1 BBY in the apartment?
  • Yep! On the back of the card. Explicitly says it's a year before ANH, and that he's sharing the assignment with his wife. Dentface (talk) 00:17, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• The Topps card ref needs to be split up so that all the content sourced to it isn't including a date ref unnecessarily Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:18, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 02:04, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
• The date ref should just refer to the whole card set, not just Tarkin's individual cards Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:17, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 19:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Just noticed this now, so I'll make a single objection for this article + the spire thing: the Insider citation needs to include which article you're getting the info from. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:05, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 06:40, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Per Shay on Discord, the solution when an advertisement is the source is to just source the issue overall. That is what I have done in lieu of using the template. Dentface (talk) 08:45, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:49, 23 October 2022 (UTC)