Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Veron

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Veron

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:37, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:11, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:35, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:01, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
4. Zed42 (talk) 20:44, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• Should this be in Category:Terrestrial planets? Nothing on the page indicates that it is a planet, in which case it should instead be placed in Category:Terrestrial astronomical objects.
• I don't think the Legends grid square is necessary to mention in the BTS. Zed42 (talk) 21:46, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:50, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Per the new practice of how the term "world" should be treated, that wording needs to be changed, unless the sources identify Veron as a world, in which case it should be treated as a planet. Zed42 (talk) 02:55, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:19, June 1, 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• The history of the name "Veron" is a bit more complicated, as I have noted on the Veron/Legends article. Imperators II^(Talk) 06:26, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Implemented. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:29, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Now please fix all the grammar errors in that paragraph. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:32, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
      • How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:04, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Gwerax-hai can be added to the infobox. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:17, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • From the text you relayed to me from the reference book, it doesn't specifically say whether they were native or not? How should I implement it? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:24, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • I would assume they are native species for now, as there isn't anything that says otherwise. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:27, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
      • Implemented. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:39, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• Please fix this sentence. The captain subsequently convinced her to stay give up the bounty in the Sixty-First. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:26, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Article is at 257 words. Any EC has the go ahead to fail this. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:17, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • It's still eligible for the nomination. 141 words in the body. As long as the body is under 165 words, the length of the BTS doesn't matter. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:19, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Oh I've seen it now, nevermind. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:39, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:44, June 4, 2020 (UTC)