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Vault worlds

Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 22:23, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments:

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Support

I swear I've seen this term appear elsewhere before. Might have something to do with Scipio. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:48, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:30, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:17, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
VergenceScatter (talk) 20:42, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:11, 4 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

~~The article should mention that the Iotran Guard was affiliated with the CIS.~~ OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽}</san> 22:27, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- That should do it. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 22:32, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
  - Made a slight tweak since that just says Captain Tost was a Separatist, not the Iotran Guard. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:48, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

I've checked a digital copy of Rise of the Separatists and it only refers to them by their plural, and to me it reads like they are a particular location in the galaxy rather than a type of world like this article describes. Captain Tost's lotran Guard protects the vault worlds, supported by IG-1GO MagnaGuards... Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:05, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. How does that look? Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 17:01, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
  - The current wording is actually fine. It doesn't suggest anything about what they are. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 17:55, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
    - Ok then, though shouldn't the article be moved to Vault worlds. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:51, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
      - In my opinion, I don't think so because of the wording used in the sentence. But I can ask an EC. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 05:01, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
        In light of the fact that we are not given any more information on what these vault worlds are, I think it'd be best if the article was moved to the form that is used in the source, i.e., plural. Also note that since the article doesn't necessarily interpret it to be a planetary type, the category should be changed. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:20, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
        Moved and category changed. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 14:42, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Vergence

~~Based on the excerpt, I think that it would make sense to add "the" to the beginning of the article.~~ VergenceScatter (talk) 20:16, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 20:41, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:23, 4 April 2021 (UTC)