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Vandelhelm Combine

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 15:02, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Bit of a weird continuity thing.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:30, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Maybe they lost the planet again just like we have to assume for Alaris Prime Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:59, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:24, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. LucaRoR (Talk) 15:22, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 19:49, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Please expand upon the date note. If the Journal doesn't explicitly use BBY dates, it should be explained how the ones it does use connect to that.
  • I also do not think the combination of pipelinking and referencing quite works in the last sentence of the BTS. The Wizards.com source (for which you should note the release year in the BTS, BTW) only mentions 22,000 years after the foundation of the Republic and does not in any way mention the six hundred years separating the planet's discovery from the Syndicate Wars. You should explain that explicitly in an additional ref note. Imperators II(Talk) 15:33, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The subject's affiliation to the Hutt Cartel is infobox-exclusive. Imperators II(Talk) 18:59, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Leftover from Rath Cartel; removed. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:49, 5 August 2021 (UTC)