Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified space station (Pantora)

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Unidentified space station (Pantora)

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 21:21, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: If I had a nickel for every unidentified space station from "A Closed Fist Has No Claws" I've nominated so far, I'd have 2 nickels. Which isn't a lot but it's weird it's happened twice.
• Date Archived: 09:09, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 184 words (0 introduction, 138 body, 46 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:10, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:17, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:28, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 04:33, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• The star system is currently infobox-exclusive, you'll have to work a mention of it into the article's body. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Done Sanathestarr (talk) 21:41, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
• So is the grid square, actually, which for Canon we treat as IU information. Take a peek at, say, this article to see how that should be reflected in the article. Additionally, Pantora is placed in the Trailing Sectors the same way Abhean is placed in the Slice, so please note how that should be documented as well - see the infobox, the article's body, and the categorization. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:37, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Added the grid square. Is there any source for the Trailing Sectors thing in canon? Trailing Sectors doesn't have a pic and Pantora makes no mention of it. Sanathestarr (talk) 21:45, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Oh, it's literally the same as that for the Slice on that Abhean article - The Galactic Explorer's Guide. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:48, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Does the current version work? Sanathestarr (talk) 22:00, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
        • I've edited the article to show you what I meant there. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:29, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
• One more thing, right now there's a bit of missing linking between the events. Why is the public house sentence there? Did the conversation between the human and Ro mentioned in the next sentence happen there? In that case, that sentence, the one beginning with "The human was questioned ..." could just be begun with "There, the human was questioned ..."
  • Fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 10:06, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
• And also, the connection between the mention of Nagor in the dating ref and the rest of the article is left unclear - what do they have to do with the meeting between the human and Ro? Imperators II^(Talk) 22:29, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • mb, I used the same date ref for all stuff from the dantooine scene, changed it Sanathestarr (talk) 10:06, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• There's an instance of a consecutive reference being used Lewisr (talk) 22:32, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Corrected Sanathestarr (talk) 10:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
• The message should be noted as one she recorded Lewisr (talk) 22:32, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Done Sanathestarr (talk) 10:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
• The BTS and apps section aren't consistent with the exact nature of the station's appearance Lewisr (talk) 22:32, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 10:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Anil

• Does Heir to the Jedi mention the moon Pantora itself? As far as I can see, only "Pantora system" is mentioned. If that's the case, noting that it is "based on corresponding data for Pantora system" instead in that ref would be more accurate. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
  • I just used the source that Pantora had for that information, I don't own the book. Changed the ref to your suggestion Sanathestarr (talk) 19:52, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• A quick reviewing note: There is no need to manually add any of the Category:Locations by grid square categories. They are automatically added by using the grid square listed in the infobox. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:29, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:33, 16 February 2024 (UTC)