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Unidentified Ord Mantell senator (34 BBY)

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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:06, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 15:38, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:54, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 20:39, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 12:29, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Realized I haven't objected to this on your other Plagueis noms, but how do we know that this part of the book is in 34 BBY? It seems to say 34–32 BBY in that section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:55, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
    • It's in the first chapter of the section, and the events of the first chapter take place concurrently with one another. (Plagueis itself goes in chronological order). -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 18:03, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
Kris
  • Not necessarily an objection, but the citations on the first sentence confuse me a bit! Is there a reason "planet" is separately cited from the rest of the paragraph? Was Ord Mantell not known to be a planet in the Darth Plagueis novel? Admittedly, I have not read it, but it does appear a bit strange from an outsider's perspective, so I thought I'd ask for clarification's sake. Herasoars(comms) 20:53, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Darth Plagueis does not say that Ord Mantell is a planet, so it needed to be cited to another source. -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 12:53, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
  • I'd recommend adding Valorum's response to the article's quote.
  • Where did this session of the Senate take place? On Coruscant? If we know where it took place, that should be added to the article.
  • We know that the senator used the "him" pronoun. Please add this to the article's infobox and add the Category:Individuals with he/him pronouns. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 13:03, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • "Senator" should be in lowercase per the MoS. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:36, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I disagree, but it seems like most other people want lowercase, so lowercase it is. -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 00:44, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
      • It's not because of want, it's policy, agree or disagree it's how it is. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:48, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
        • Per my coments on the Kuati senator article, I think "Senator" should be treated like "Jedi Knight" or "Sith Lord" and be capitalized in all contexts. -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 00:58, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
          • Like I said, be that as it may it still goes against policy. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:24, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
  • (Review note) Please review my copy edit. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:36, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I think it is most likely refering to the restitution of the Republic Military, which is a military and not an army. -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 00:44, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
      • It shouldn't be pipelinked to that unless it's explicitly confirmed. Either way, if you believe army shouldn't be pipelinked there, it can be linked in the part of the article explicitly mentioning the term. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:48, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
        • Reading the quote on the article, army and military seem to be contextually interchangeable here irregardless. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:50, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
          • I'd rather have Army/Legends link to the explicit mention of army, and "military force" not link to anything, If that is alright with you. -ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 00:53, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
            • That's fine. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:53, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:29, 30 January 2023 (UTC)