- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified Imperial factory
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 16:54, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I did check the full sources list of Tamara Ryvora's grandfather for this; only some mentioned the factory itself.
- Date Archived: 12:00, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 218 words (0 introduction, 164 body, 54 behind the scenes)
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Support
- Lewisr (talk) 19:42, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 15:49, 5 May 2023 (UTC) 
Fan26 (Talk) 19:14, 11 May 2023 (UTC)- Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:45, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:36, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
Object
Uber
I believe a link between the First Order and Empire should be established, which could clue us in on Ryvora's reason to view the First Order positively.UberSoldat93
(talk) 08:59, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
- Did a bit of fiddling to make it more clear, somewhat echoing the grandfather's page.—spookywillowwtalk 21:40, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
- Also the fact that the FO descended from/is a successor to the Empire. I'm not sure if sources confirm that it was public knowledge in the galaxy, but either way I think it's worth mentioning. I didn't quite realize it at the time of the grandfather's nomination. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:15, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- With Dani's help, found that it is sourceable to USWNE and added in. 'Tis hovering at 164 words, let me know if more shuffling is needed to add something else.—spookywillowwtalk 15:39, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work. Would appreciate if this can be added to the grandfather's page too. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:49, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work. Would appreciate if this can be added to the grandfather's page too. UberSoldat93
- With Dani's help, found that it is sourceable to USWNE and added in. 'Tis hovering at 164 words, let me know if more shuffling is needed to add something else.—spookywillowwtalk 15:39, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
- Also the fact that the FO descended from/is a successor to the Empire. I'm not sure if sources confirm that it was public knowledge in the galaxy, but either way I think it's worth mentioning. I didn't quite realize it at the time of the grandfather's nomination. UberSoldat93
- Did a bit of fiddling to make it more clear, somewhat echoing the grandfather's page.—spookywillowwtalk 21:40, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:36, 13 May 2023 (UTC)