Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Umbara resistance

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Umbara resistance

• Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:59, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WookieeProject Catalyst is an effort by me, alone, to nom Catalyst pages at random until the end of time or there are no more Catalyst pages. Whichever comes first
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Support

1. VergenceScatter (talk) 13:39, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
2. I like the way you tied in the Princess of Alderaan bit. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:42, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:07, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 05:15, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:50, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
6. OOM 224 15:14, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Cade Calrayn

• Since the audiobook came out on the same day, it and the novel should both have {{1stm}}, in this style: {{1stm|''Catalyst: A Rogue One Novel'' audiobook}}, which generates this: {{1stm|''Catalyst: A Rogue One Novel'' audiobook}}. Cade Calrayn 02:13, 14 August 2021 (UTC)

Luca

• I'd give a date for the Rebellion on Umbara since there is one. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:40, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:56, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Great! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:07, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• My copy-edit. Just one thing: "The Umbara rebellion was considered an outgrowth of the Clone Wars" — considered by whom? OOM 224 19:40, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:31, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Yup, that's better. I now think that part would benefit from one more bit of context: I suggest removing "According to" and adding "told researcher Lyra Erso that" (per your Rebellion on Umbara GA) right after "Orson Callan Krennic" OOM 224 17:58, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
      • that work? Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:42, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Resolved via Discord OOM 224 15:14, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:14, 22 August 2021 (UTC)