Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tokuut

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Tokuut

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 07:27, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Almost forgot to add a 'Notes and references' section…

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:25, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 15:18, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 20:24, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
4. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 20:38, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 14:17, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
6. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:16, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• "Did some heroic actions" should be worded with a more formal tone. Zed42 (talk) 09:02, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Does this look better? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:24, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've modified it slightly. Zed42 (talk) 10:31, April 10, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The entire first sentence is sourced to the date reference. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:34, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 07:09, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
• I'm not sure the part about Andrissus being remembered is necessary for this article since it doesn't involve the world. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:43, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Objection handled via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:25, April 12, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• Is there any particular reason 'a terrestrial world...' is used instead of 'a terrestrial astronomical object'? Given that it's only used in the same sentence as Sigma Station, which is at 'terrestrial location'.—spookywilloww^talk 00:14, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • I was advised to do this for Asyrphus and have been doing it for the location nominations that followed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:58, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fair enough.—spookywilloww^talk 14:17, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:16, April 15, 2020 (UTC)