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Tobbert Dalonbian
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Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 16:25, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, May 21, 2020 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 19:58, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn (Talk) 12:34, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Please note in the article's body that Tobbert shared his last name with the Dalonbian sector.Imperators II(Talk) 10:38, May 19, 2020 (UTC)- There's no way for me to connect them. Could be coincidence for all we know. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
- What you need to do is just say in the article's body (not the BTS) "This dude shared his name with the Dalonbian sector, [context for the sector]." Imperators II(Talk) 19:09, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
- There's no way for me to connect them. Could be coincidence for all we know. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
Per precedent, you should attempt to narrow down the release date of the HNN article. Try going through this JCF thread to see if there are any hints.Imperators II(Talk) 19:44, May 21, 2020 (UTC)- Done, but I can't get it to archive properly. Think the Wayback Machine is down at the moment. Nor do I know how to fix the time of the post. OtterSurf (talk) 20:20, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
- The full timestamp is visible if you hover the mouse pointer over the date. Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Done, but I can't get it to archive properly. Think the Wayback Machine is down at the moment. Nor do I know how to fix the time of the post. OtterSurf (talk) 20:20, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
The CP
Hello Otter, please note that the references should use the HNN citation template as well. Also the categories are not supported by the rest of the article.Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 17:07, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
The article uses "his" in regard to Dalonbian but there is no other indication of a specified gender.Zed42 (talk) 22:45, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
The article includes Category:Astronomers but there is no other indication of the occupation in the article body. Is there actually a source that establishes Dalonbian as an astronomer? Please revise.- (Reviewing note) I have removed the link to President as there is no need to have a link to a disambiguation page there.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:34, May 26, 2020 (UTC)