Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tobbert Dalonbian

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Tobbert Dalonbian

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:48, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:25, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:48, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:58, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
4. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:34, May 26, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Please note in the article's body that Tobbert shared his last name with the Dalonbian sector. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:38, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • There's no way for me to connect them. Could be coincidence for all we know. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • What you need to do is just say in the article's body (not the BTS) "This dude shared his name with the Dalonbian sector, [context for the sector]." Imperators II^(Talk) 19:09, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
      • Looks awkward, but done. OtterSurf (talk) 19:13, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Per precedent, you should attempt to narrow down the release date of the HNN article. Try going through this JCF thread to see if there are any hints. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:44, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done, but I can't get it to archive properly. Think the Wayback Machine is down at the moment. Nor do I know how to fix the time of the post. OtterSurf (talk) 20:20, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • The full timestamp is visible if you hover the mouse pointer over the date. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:48, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

The CP

• Hello Otter, please note that the references should use the HNN citation template as well. Also the categories are not supported by the rest of the article. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 17:07, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• The article uses "his" in regard to Dalonbian but there is no other indication of a specified gender. Zed42 (talk) 22:45, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• The article includes Category:Astronomers but there is no other indication of the occupation in the article body. Is there actually a source that establishes Dalonbian as an astronomer? Please revise.
• (Reviewing note) I have removed the link to President as there is no need to have a link to a disambiguation page there. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed, and thanks. OtterSurf (talk) 19:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:34, May 26, 2020 (UTC)