Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tam Posla's superior officer

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Tam Posla's superior officer

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 02:00, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tam Posla lore
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CO

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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:02, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Make sure ur okay with this copy-edit, Fan26 (Talk) 20:33, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

   :Thumbs up: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

3. DFaceG (talk) 02:06, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 03:04, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
5. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:46, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
6. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:22, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Manoof

• I think the removing of the badge by "the brass" should be removed from this article, as it's not clear if "the brass" is this officer, being his direct superior; a more senior officer or a committee/panel/group of senior officers who made the decision as a group. You could still close the article by saying that he had his badge removed, just disconnect that action as a direct action by this officer, if that makes sense. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:33, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Per Helmet Collection 65, the superior officer did indeed "fire" Posla. I have replaced the wording "brass" to high ranking for some more formality. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Still one use of brass that needs to be changed. I think the only acceptable use would be to say that Posla mentioned his badge was taken by "the brass" or something like that, so it's clear those are his words, but that would be in addition to explaining the event itself i.e. Posla lost his badge and then later explained "the brass" took his badge Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm unsure what you mean, but I changed that instance of brass. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:33, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
• I think we should reference the superior officer removing his badge to the helmet collection given it isn't clear in Aphra that it was the officer or someone else. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Helmet collection says "fired," which is the same thing, but I'd rather attribute the relevant source to the specific "taking his badge" part. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:33, 19 March 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• The BTS is discussing two sources from the same year, so per the layout guide it needs to specify that they were released on the same date Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:57, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:39, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
    • If I may interject, the film is not a source listed on this article, so I believe it's not worth mentioning it at all. Besides, it doesn't line up with the current film status article precedent anyway. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:10, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
      • I don't think there's any loss in mentioning the film itself, but either works, so I've changed accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:18, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:22, 23 March 2022 (UTC)