Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Talay

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Talay

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:22, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 18:10, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 177 words (0 introduction, 100 body, 77 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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Support

1. FFG mission to Talay flashbacks OOM 224 (he/him) 19:52, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:07, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:10, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• More than half of Talay's marker lies on the Outer Rim side of the Mid Rim-Outer Rim boundary, so I'd say that the fact that it was in the Mid Rim in Legends isn't really relevant here anymore.
• I just noticed that apparently you've already used on several articles erroneous rewordings of the map's legend: it says "REBEL OPERATIONS SECTOR/REGIONAL HQS" which is most definitely not the same as "a regional headquarters and operations sector" or "regional headquarters and operations sectors". Please correct this on both this article and the others. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:20, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:09, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Still seeing an instance over on Brigia. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:24, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:20, 5 February 2024 (UTC)

Uber

• Both Talays are identified separately in Dark Forces Official Player's Guide, so you could add that to the BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:33, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:20, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
    • You'll want to clarify that they're separate entities too, it currently reads as if there is only the planet Talay, not a city too. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:11, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:10, 6 February 2024 (UTC)