Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Subjugation of Sinton

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Subjugation of Sinton

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:07, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels and Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ambition. Also first non-TIE nom for a while.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:32, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Any more alleged events being established as factual by later sources? UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:50, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 21:50, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Is the title conjectural? Capitalization in BTS says otherwise.
  • Formally called such by Sulamar in Darksaber. Granted he's literally a fraud, but still, event is proven to exist in later material. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:33, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
    • The title is not reflected in the body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:35, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:38, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Please put it at the beginning like we do for every other article on the wiki. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:42, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:51, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
• Abridged audiobook needs to be investigated for a mention and unabridged audiobook should be added to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Abridged audiobook doesn't include it, and unabridged is added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:39, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
• The full date range should be specified in the body.
• You need to rewrite the date note into something matching other status articles such as this. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:54, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:02, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• The last two sentences of the BTS are unnecessary - we don't make a habit out of noting in the BTS whenever a concrete date for something is not given. Please remove them. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:37, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:39, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
• The Essential Atlas does not establish that Sinton was a planet.
• I'm not convinced that the label of Sinton marked with "slave labor" on that map constitutes a mention of the subjugation. In light of the lack of precise dating, for all we know the subjugation itself may have been a short event that was subsequently followed at some point by a period of slavery, and the map would be referencing the latter instead. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:01, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:15, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
• In the date note, you should establish why the Subjugation of Sinton needs to have occurred after the establishment of the Empire.
  • That still doesn't work, you need to establish why the event must have occurred during the Empire's reign at all. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:07, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Adjusted date text to only talk about by 3 ABY. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 12:57, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
• Please provide a bit of context for Ardan.
• I believe it would also be great if you could work in a mention of the fact that the Empire was Humanocentric. That would provide additional context for Sinton's inhabitants being specifically identified as non-Human. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:45, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  • 1st and 3rd addressed. Not sure how context can be given for Ardan, given that there's no context for his role in the Empire at the time of that event. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:39, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Would it be more accurate to say "Sulamar brags of his military exploits, which includes the Subjugation of Sinton, throughout the story" instead? I can only find one mention of the event in Darksaber using Google Books OOM 224 09:11, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:41, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:14, 8 August 2021 (UTC)