Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Siege at Onderon

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Siege at Onderon

Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:57, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: The Outer Rim Sieges battle we can't assume was part of the sieges--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:57, 15 November 2020 (UTC)

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Support

VergenceScatter (talk) 17:00, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 01:22, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
LordMominutiae (talk) 02:55, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 18:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 19:39, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:43, 24 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

OOM

~~I think it's speculatory to say that the Republic was involved. All we know is that the siege involved Saw Gerrera, who was linked to Anakin and Obi-Wan's Republic forces' sub-space frequency "Fulcrum~~."
- The article is written to say he is fighting on behalf of the Republic, which he must be, if he can call them for aid and Kenobi is concerned. Are you asking it to be removed from the infobox? --Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:26, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
  - Asking a friend for help doesn't necessarily mean you're fighting on behalf of their organization. The Republic should be removed from the infobox and the article rewritten to avoid speculation, in my opinion.
    - The Infobox has been edited, but, if Gerrera could contact them for aid, their interests must be the same. Perhaps it should be edited to better say that?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:19, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
      - Yes, it should. By the way, I don't see a need to mention the Republic other than its part in the Clone Wars in the first paragraph; "fighting on behalf of the Republic" could just be removed. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:51, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
        This is what I meant. Thoughts?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 05:20, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
        Made a slight adjustment. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:40, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
~~Context should be provided for the quote.~~ - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:48, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
- Good? --Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:26, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
  - That's fine. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 18:53, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
~~The annexation of Onderon could added to the infobox, and given a mention in the article.~~ - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 18:53, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- Infobox, yes, but I don’t think it fits in the body. We do not know that full story other than that it comes, at some point, next. I feel like it would be speculative to add it as we do not know when it happened. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
  - Well, now thinking about it, it has been removed because that is assuming when the siege ends.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:03, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
~~Don't see a reason for listing Coruscant and Mandalore in the infobox. They both occur after the Battle of Yerbana.~~ - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:58, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- fixed --Editoronthewiki (talk) 05:13, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

It is wholly unnecessary and flat-out speculation to say the Onderon civil war was a recent conflict, since many conflicts take place in the same year. The article would be better off without the long note to explain that single word and instead use something else like "earlier that year." UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
- good?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:21, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Imp

Ref 1 fails at both of its purposes: it does not establish that the Onderonian Civil War occurred prior to the siege, and it does not establish that the siege occurs in 19 BBY, as opposed to, say, the last days of 20 BBY. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:58, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
- That work?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
  - Please split the ref into two separate refs. There's no need to have one ginormous ref for two different things. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:15, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
    - done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:21, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
~~Please list both the Onderonian Civil War and the Battle of Coruscant in the infobox's previous and next fields.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 16:15, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
- Steela's funeral is after the civil war. No reason to include it.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:00, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  - Also, we should not assume when the siege ends by placing the Battle of Coruscant there--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:03, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:44, 24 December 2020 (UTC)