Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sea-snake

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Sea-snake

  • Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 19:51, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I didn't include an external link to Wikipedia as this appears to be a specific species rather than a general class, but I'm happy to add one if others believe it to be necessary
  • Date Archived: 02:42, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
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Support

  1. Corlys Velaryon called he wants his nickname back BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird(Syndicure) 00:07, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
    ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:54, 20 January 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- OOM 224 (he/him) 21:05, 1 February 2023 (UTC))
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 22:47, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:06, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) RainbowRebellion2 (talk!) 09:36, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 (he/him) 21:05, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • In the infobox, you source the seasnake's homeworld to Coruscant and the Core Worlds. In the body, you source it to CSWE. Is this intentional? If not, I'd recommend being consistent and sourcing it to the same source in the infobox and the body.
  • I'm not sure you need the {{1stID}} next to Coruscant and the Core Worlds. (its first mention) I'd keep the one next to CSWE, as that source introduces a new name. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:30, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I'd recommend mentioning Riome's region (Outer Rim Territories) instead of its star system. You mention Coruscant's region, but not Riome's. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:45, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I didn't do that because that would require putting in another citation, which I didn't think was worth it. Do you think it's important enough that I state the region? VergenceScatter (talk) 21:46, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
      • I think you should do it since you mention Coruscant's region. I don't think adding another citation is a problem. :P Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 12:22, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • The bts implies that you're going with one name over the other, but you mention both in the body. I think you can reword the bts to just describe the CSWE mention as a new identification instead. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:14, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • The only SW-unique property (or at least, *distinct* property) these seem to have is the bit about being ribbon-like, and even then there's an argument to be made that IRL snakes share that trait. I'd say the Wikipedia article should be linked. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:40, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:35, 6 February 2023 (UTC)