Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rhelg

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Rhelg

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

  1. Goodmind (talk) 14:43, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Comics require full release date, which can't be cited to the comic book itself and must use {{DarkHorse}}.
    • If I may interject here, Erebus is right, but please do use this instead of the DarkHorse template. Imperators II(Talk) 10:02, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Before mentioning Malachor, Ziost and Jaguada, it should include a mention that they were also planets. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:25, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
OOM
  • It's best to avoid paraphrasing. Try rewriting the article without referring to the ordering of information in the source itself, and try changing up the sentence structure too. That way, you'd be able to re-interpret and express the information with greater clarity. For example, the article currently contains redundant wording that repeat the same points: "were not aware of their history" "completely unaware of their Sith history." OOM 224 23:14, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
  • If known, could you establish who the inhabitants were?
  • Could you add a picture on the BTS of the planet from Star Wars Legends? — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:45, 9 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

  1. ECvote Unaddressed objection over a week old. OOM 224 10:30, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 10:32, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:32, 10 May 2022 (UTC)