Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Posthumous Black Laurel for Service to the Empire

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Posthumous Black Laurel for Service to the Empire

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  1. ECvote Welcome to the CAN. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:24, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  2. Nice job --Lewisr (talk) 14:14, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Nice--Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:17, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Welcome to the CAN!Fan26 (Talk) 14:50, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  5. Great work on your first CAN! CIS roundel Erebus Chronus Open frequency 15:47, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Good work, sorry for archiving too soon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:29, September 13, 2020 (UTC)

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Lewisr
  • The date will require a full note for how the book takes place in 0 ABY, as the link from SW.com that you linked doesn't use 0 ABY --Lewisr (talk) 01:30, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • I added the note. I realized that it should actually say around 0 ABY, since it's never actually stated that BFII takes place in the same year as the Battle of Yavin. VergenceScatter (talk) 01:40, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
  • The article is too short to require an image of an unrelated subject-those generally belong in the body, which this article lacks.
  • Please cut down on the extraneous context for Marana's suicide in the second paragraph. Fan26 (Talk) 04:09, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the BtS, please identify Inferno Squad as a canon novel, and give its author. Fan26 (Talk) 04:10, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • Apologies for the interjection, but the BTS doesn't need to specify that the novel is canon unless the subject previously appeared in Legends. (Author requirement still applies though.) Zed42 (talk) 04:14, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ah, thank you Zed. Had forgotten that one. Fan26 (Talk) 04:16, September 9, 2020 (UTC)
Vitus
OOM
Ayrehead
  • We don't actually know that Seyn received the award do we? Just that she was recommended for it. As such, she shouldn't be listed in recipients in the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:31, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • You should specify that Inferno Squad was Imperial in the second paragraph. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:31, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Context for Saw, just say something like "rebel leader". Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:56, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • "The Black Laurel was given" should be "could be given" we don't know what other circumstances its given in. Generally its best not to be definitive with this kind of stuff unless the source is. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, September 13, 2020 (UTC)

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