Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Pedd Four

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Pedd Four

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 18:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:57, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 20:14, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:22, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Please provide a quote from either A Practical Man or The Essential Atlas that refers to this world as "Pedd 4," the only mention in A Practical Man I'm seeing uses "Pedd Four". Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please add a cropped version of the Atlas Vong War map image to the article's infobox. Don't forget the image category, as well. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • I've uploaded a higher-quality version of the map where the Pedd system is more clearly visible. Did you forget to add the image category to the article? Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • No, added that. And thanks. OtterSurf (talk) 10:12, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please resolve the following objections that you also had to face on the Shirb system nomination:
    • The objection about the New Territories. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Context for the hyperlane. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • The objection about Atlas maps and 1) the Affiliation field of the infobox and 2) affiliation categories. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:44, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
        • This has not been fully addressed. Please see what the legend of the Atlas Vong map No. 1 has to say about Pedd. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
          • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 10:24, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
            • No, the map of the first phase of the Vong war. Imperators II(Talk) 10:27, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
              • Done, see below. OtterSurf (talk) 11:03, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
                • No. Please see the map on page 217, the label for Pedd, and the map's legend. Imperators II(Talk) 11:12, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
                  • I already mentioned that Pedd was a NR stronghold, and that troops moved on Axxila from there. There's nothing more to add, from what I can see! OtterSurf (talk) 13:16, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
                    • Let me quote my objection above: "1) the Affiliation field of the infobox and 2) affiliation categories". Imperators II(Talk) 13:22, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • The objection about the use of table of contents. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Could you help me out on that one? I'm not seeing it. OtterSurf (talk) 17:44, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
        • You can find the objection on that nomination by using Ctrl+F or the equivalent search function of your operating system. Imperators II(Talk) 11:08, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • The objection about the immediate neighbor systems on the hyperlane. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
        • Systems, please, since none of that info about Cestus and Celanon can be sourced to the Atlas. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • BTS: context for A Practical Man, please. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Online Companion only mentions the system, not Pedd Four itself, therefore the corresponding reference should add the following: — Based on corresponding data for [[Pedd system]] Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • The first-and-a-half sentence of the article cannot be sourced straight to the Atlas like that, please revise. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • "Pedd Four was an astronomical object located in the Pedd system of the D'Astan sector" — this cannot be sourced straight to the Atlas like that, since that book doesn't mention either Pedd Four or the D'Astan sector. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • I attributed it to the EAOC, which does. OtterSurf (talk) 10:42, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
          • You haven't even touched the first sentence of the article since I've left my objection. Imperators II(Talk) 10:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
            • Forgot about the intro. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 11:06, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
              • As I said four lines above, TEA doesn't mention Pedd Four. Imperators II(Talk) 11:12, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
                • I can't find anything else that designstes Pedd Four as a planet. OtterSurf (talk) 12:17, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
                  • You should simply source it to A Practical Man, which is the original source that establishes the existence of the astronomical object Pedd Four. Imperators II(Talk) 12:19, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please see the "Template usage" subsection of this section of the Layout Guide. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • This objection is still unaddressed. Imperators II(Talk) 18:17, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Talk about a schoolboy error. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 21:22, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
        • No, it isn't. Please read through the subsection I mentioned in my objection. I was referring to the usage of the {{ID}} template. Imperators II(Talk) 11:06, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • The quote contains more information that can be added to the article. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Is there actually anything that identifies Pedd Four as a planet? If not, it should be treated as an astronomical object, with it being reflected in the article's wording and categorization. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've had to use 'planet' for affiliations and the like, but I've also used the astronomical object category. OtterSurf (talk) 17:55, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • I've cleaned up the mess that was the category list on this article for you. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please link this. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Atlas maps contain more detailed info, such as dating, that should be added to the article. Imperators II(Talk) 14:02, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • What about the move to Axxila from the Pedd system? That seems notable enough to be mentioned here. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:42, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
          • I'm talking about the one depicted on the map of the first phase of the Vong war. Imperators II(Talk) 10:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
            • Ah. I was looking at the wrong planet. OtterSurf (talk) 10:56, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please see this objection from the Shirb system CAN: "Good, now go back to that category you've created and 1) add an appropriate category to that category, and 2) add more (at least one more) pages to that category. Imperators II(Talk) 17:49, September 13, 2019 (UTC) " Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Which category is that? The New Territories one? OtterSurf (talk) 10:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
      • The image category you've created has no categories on it at all. Imperators II(Talk) 10:47, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 13:14, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
          • Please see the second point of the objection. Imperators II(Talk) 13:16, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
            • Soooooo, you want me to add more pictures of Pedd Four...? OtterSurf (talk) 17:16, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please break up the article into more paragraphs, it's becoming a wall of text. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • What has the current sentence mentioning Beviin got to do with Pedd Four? Please remove it. Imperators II(Talk) 10:07, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
Zed

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:22, February 17, 2020 (UTC)