Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Oshira

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Oshira

• Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:26, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
2. VergenceScatter (talk) 00:49, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:35, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus (talk) 19:04, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
5. Immi Thrax (talk) 19:09, 14 February 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• I've added a redlink for you to fill out.
  • Created--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:10, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
• Sharing a name with something is more intrinsic to the subject than being depicted in an IU medium, so please reorder the sentences so that the more intrinsic info is presented first. Same goes the Bernilla nom. Note that this will also create an opportunity for you to avoid the awkward "the planet Batuu. The planet shared [...]" repetition. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:01, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Changed--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:10, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:55, 15 February 2021 (UTC)