Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ompiach

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Ompiach

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 14:02, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
2. Nice job. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:10, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:59, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
4. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:54, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:09, June 1, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• The ABY date needs a manual reference note. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:09, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 14:18, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Does the book use the term "Rebellion era"? If not, I'd like to see a connection be made in the BTS between the events of the sourcebook and the Rebellion era, as opposed to the New Republic era. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:32, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 12:54, June 1, 2020 (UTC)

The CP

• Based on the header quote, is there more that could be said about Ompiach's relationsip with other pirate groups or the leader himself? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:30, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. I've also added his relationship with the Venithon Twins, since they worked for him. OtterSurf (talk) 18:00, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• I think the gender would be better of being presented in conjunction with his species; eg. "Nalroni male", per precedent on almost all status articles, instead of being pipelinked in.
• From what I can gather of the source, it seems like "by 2 ABY" would be more appropriate for the article's wording, instead of "in 2 ABY". I could be incorrect about that, but unless the book says that he was only the leader of that group in that one year, it'd make more sense for a dossier like that to document that he was the leader of the group by the the year the report was written.
• It would be nice to specify that the Mieru'kar sector is in the Outer Rim; for context and solidifying Omipach's pirating style of life.
  • I think it would be better to to source the Mieru'kar sector being in the Outer Rim to the SW.com article itself using that template, per precedent when dealing with that Atlas companion.—spookywilloww^talk 18:17, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 19:37, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
• Honestly think the very last sentence is a bit of a run-on, could be split and worded to flow as such.
• Just clarifying - does the source specify that it's events occur two years after the Battle of Yavin, as said in the BtS? The dating reference for the article body uses "one year before the Battle of Hoth". If the source does explicitly say the former about the Yavin battle, it'd suit, though I personally think keeping both dating points consistent would be best.—spookywilloww^talk 01:28, May 30, 2020 (UTC)
  • All fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 07:54, May 30, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:09, June 1, 2020 (UTC)