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Neelig
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:37, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
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- Samonic
16:33, 24 July 2022 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 16:50, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 16:50, 29 July 2022 (UTC)- Imperators II(Talk) 06:56, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:42, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
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Fan26
The wording is very unclear in this article...for starters the snake apparently went extinct, but that fact is only introduced to give chronological placement for the bit that Neelig is also an Ithorian boy name.Fan26 (Talk) 01:51, 25 July 2022 (UTC)- I did my best, wasn't sure exactly how to reword this. Among other things, there's no way to tell if Neelig became an Ithorian name before the snakes later went extinct, or only became one after. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:44, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- I think you can condense the final two sentences into one sentence, since both contain info pertaining to the name derived from the snake species. Fan26 (Talk) 02:49, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:52, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- Clean'd it up a tad Fan26 (Talk) 16:50, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:52, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- I think you can condense the final two sentences into one sentence, since both contain info pertaining to the name derived from the snake species. Fan26 (Talk) 02:49, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- I did my best, wasn't sure exactly how to reword this. Among other things, there's no way to tell if Neelig became an Ithorian name before the snakes later went extinct, or only became one after. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:44, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:43, 30 July 2022 (UTC)