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Nea Dajanam
- Nominated by: RocketLaunchJr (talk) 03:20, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 10:39, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 87 words (0 introduction, 59 body, 28 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 60 words (0 introduction, 33 body, 27 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST
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Support votes
Lewisr (talk) 21:17, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 00:06, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 10:38, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Dani
You need to add a "Based on corresponding data for the X system" note to your 1st reference note. See Tehar for an example. NBDani(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 09:12, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 23:24, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
Lew
The note saying 'places the Nea Dajanam system' needs to note it also therefore places Nea Dajanam itself. Similar to how it's done on NovorLewisr (talk) 21:03, 16 August 2025 (UTC)- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 01:15, 18 August 2025 (UTC)
Grid square needs to be mentioned in the body (and it should be linked to Standard Galactic Grid in the infobox)Lewisr (talk) 21:03, 16 August 2025 (UTC)- Fixed! RocketLaunchJr (talk) 11:50, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
I think you can include that the pilot had left to join Corona Squadron by the date of Invasions of NabooLewisr (talk) 21:03, 16 August 2025 (UTC)- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 08:19, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- I meant include the date rather than the event itself Lewisr (talk) 21:07, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- Kept both in. RocketLaunchJr (talk) 11:50, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
- I meant include the date rather than the event itself Lewisr (talk) 21:07, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 08:19, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
Couple BTS tweaks: a year for the novel's release is needed, and the Journey to Star Wars: The Force Awakens is a publishing program rather than a seriesLewisr (talk) 21:03, 16 August 2025 (UTC)- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 08:19, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- The full release date isn't needed, just the year Lewisr (talk) 21:07, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- fixed! RocketLaunchJr (talk) 12:20, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
- To note you don't need to keep that reference in future, but did remove it for this time Lewisr (talk) 03:37, 22 August 2025 (UTC)
- fixed! RocketLaunchJr (talk) 12:20, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
- The full release date isn't needed, just the year Lewisr (talk) 21:07, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 08:19, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
spookly
Is Invasions of Naboo definitively capitalized in-universe? The event's own article seems to treat it as de-capitalized.- I've decapitalised it RocketLaunchJr (talk) 12:17, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
The reference note for the Interior should outright link Nea Dajanam system instead of leaving the 'Nea Dajanam' part unlinked and only linking Star system, as the link to the subject itself takes priority.- Fixed! RocketLaunchJr (talk) 12:17, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
If a subject is only in a single source, we drop the "first" word in the BTS, as its self-implied that the only mention/introduction is the first. The word "first" as part of "...was first mentioned in..." only gets included if there is more than one source/appearance for the subject.—spookywillowwtalk 13:52, 20 August 2025 (UTC)- fixed! RocketLaunchJr (talk) 12:17, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:39, 4 September 2025 (UTC)