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Meat-striped fruit squares

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:23, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:15, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
  3. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:38, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Looks like meat's back on the menu boys Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:56, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Just keep in mind that linking in quote attributions is only needed where the subject isn't mentioned and linked in the body Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:41, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • Please format your quote correctly: you must use « and » instead of "s.
  • I see nothing confirming this in either novel. "occasioanlly ate meat-striped fruit squares for her morning and afternoon meals.[1]"
  • You need to mention the quote in prose and say that Che'ri ate meat-striped fruit squares shortly before the Sunrise incident around 18 BBY. (that's the Hammer part) Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 13:42, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
  • "Meat-striped fruit squares were a food eaten in the Chiss Ascendancy, the nation of the Chiss species." This reads like you could only eat this food in the Ascendancy, please reword to specify that it could be eaten by Chiss.
  • "Around 18 BBY,[2] Mitth'ali'astov "Thalias", who was Che'ri's caregiver, made the meal for the young girl aboard the Springhawk.[1]" Does the book say that Thalias made the squares? (Also please mention the squares in that sentence. :P)
  • Maaayyybeee I should have mentioned it, but the Springhawk didn't face off only against the Hammer. Bogey One (Sunrise) was there too. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:35, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
  • You need to specify when Che'ri ate them shortly before witnessing the mighty power of the Kilji Illumine: around 18 BBY. :P Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 12:39, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
    • didnt mentioned 18 BBY again because its already mentioned in the sentence before but added LE date note BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 16:37, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
      • It wasn't mentioned in the same sentence? It was mentioned in the prior sentence. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:26, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
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  • The infobox says it is made of fruit, which isn't actually noted in the article. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:27, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:43, 5 November 2022 (UTC)