Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mak Eak

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Mak Eak

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk)
• Nomination comments: WP:FFGAMES

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Objections handled via Discord OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 18:02, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:44, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
3. Nice work on your first CAN! Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:47, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
4. Liverpool92 21:04, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
5. DFaceG (talk) 20:33, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• As there is no other source this character is included in, please remove "first" from the BTS and keep it as "Mak Eak was mentioned in [...]". Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:37, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Completed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:38, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
• Since it is not necessary to, you can remove the sentence about how he was part of the Day of Dathomir modular encounter from the BTS. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:20, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Emitted. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:27, 10 May 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Please provide a date for the Battle of Dathomir.
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:22, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Please see my edit here OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:43, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
• Additional context for the mission would be beneficial here.
  • I added any info I had left. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:26, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Okay, but can you provide further context on what the mission was about? OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:43, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:53, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
• "He was eventually caught by the Nightsisters" Who was? Please specify. Also, is there a reason why you wrote "the Nightsisters" instead of "Nightsisters"> OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 23:15, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:18, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
    • "Mak was eventually caught by a group of Nightsisters which included Nelsel, who detected Mak and Ruul's presence" Two Nightbrothers were detected, yet only one is said to have been caught. Did Ruul get captured too? OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:43, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:45, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
• Since we know that some Nightsisters survived the battle, and you're basing the timeframe ("Before the Battle of Dathomir of 20 BBY") off the fact that the source features one Nightsister, I think it should be removed. Can you use some other information from the sourcebook to provide the same or another timeframe? OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:47, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
  • A couple things, it features multiple Nightsisters, including Nelsel, the Nightsisters are still in power at this time, and the Nightbrothers are no where near shocked to see alive Nightsisters. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:42, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:53, 25 May 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Homeworld is not established in the body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:38, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:40, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I understand that this is not my nomination, but feel free to use one of the pages I've created from CotR that has the same kind of BTS style as my Rise of the Separatists nominations. The page: Christophsis crystal. This is entirely up to you, which is why I'm leaving this as a comment rather than an objection. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 18:13, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I think the way you wrote it was better, so I added it. AmazinglyCool (talk)
    • Glad to hear! Nice work on the article so far as well! Always nice to see someone else nominating, especially an FFG page. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 18:18, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:19, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
• Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:14, 31 May 2021 (UTC)