Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Luzalite

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Luzalite

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:59, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The Luzalite from Luzalite has Luzalite things
• Date Archived: 20:20, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 115 words (0 introduction, 76 body, 39 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 23:30, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
2. Panther436 (talk) 00:43, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 19:51, 29 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The links in the captions can be removed as linked in the body Lewisr (talk) 06:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:50, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• 'little-known planet in the galaxy' I think it should be contextualised to what point in history Lewisr (talk) 06:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:50, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• Needs an IU date for the conversation between Axel and Lexxir Lewisr (talk) 06:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:50, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• The BTS should include the author of the story Lewisr (talk) 06:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:50, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• 'The planet's name was also utilized as a demonym for individuals or objects that originated from it' I'm not sure this sort of sentence is necessary and can be removed Lewisr (talk) 06:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The planet name is explicitly used as a demonym to refer to Kozmo during the story ("Luzalite lord"); it isn't solely used for the medallion. If I don't include this info in the body it would be infobox-exclusive.- Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:50, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
    • You can just say Kozmo was a Luzalite lord and it'd still convey the same Lewisr (talk) 17:42, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Reworded. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:11, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
• 'outlandish medallion pendant made of the Luzalite diamond found only on his world' I think this necessitates a Luzalite diamond page with noting it was only found on the planet Lewisr (talk) 19:45, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:36, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I think the emphasis should be more on the diamond being from there and that the medallion was made from the diamond, so essentially swapping them as they are currently are Lewisr (talk) 19:31, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Adjusted. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:31, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:51, 29 January 2024 (UTC)