Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kowakian crumb cake/Legends

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Kowakian crumb cake/Legends

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 23:37, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

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Support

1. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:10, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
2. ImpacticForce (Talk) 05:16, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:22, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:30, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
5. I'm gonna say that the tentative objection in the comments isn't pertinent. Nice work! ~ TheTrooperGuy (talk) 04:25, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
6. Cade999 (talk) 19:11, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
7. Good job on both of them! ~ D MCCG (talk) 23:07, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
8. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:01, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Vergence

• The third sentence is confusing, since it seems to say that the cake was destroyed, not the diner.VergenceScatter (talk) 02:20, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
  • That should clear it up. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 03:17, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Thanks. VergenceScatter (talk) 03:56, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• The fact that Kowak was a planet can't be sourced to the Hyperspace article.
• Context needed for Coruscant as a planet, which can be sourced to the article.
• The part about the Empire should just be cut down to something like "during the reign of the Galactic Republic" since the Hyperspace article is set during the Republic's time.
• The mention of the Iego cake is unnecessary; a few other products also share the same price, including another cake. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 11:53, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Objections handled via Discord. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:30, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

Trooper

• The cake also appears in Star Wars: Attack of the Clones: The Visual Dictionary (which was also republished in Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary) on the Dex's Diner pages. Sources should be updated and additional information added if necessary. ~ TheTrooperGuy (talk) 19:01, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
  • It turns out that the cake appeared in the movie itself as well, and it's just a {{Po}} for the VD. It should be adequately updated. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 20:43, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
    • BTS should mention that it was first pictured in the VD. ~ TheTrooperGuy (talk) 15:28, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 18:30, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
        • Looks good! ~ TheTrooperGuy (talk) 06:41, 24 December 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Context for Kowakian monkey-lizard.
• Per Layout Guide, you need to provide full dates for the visual dictionary and the film. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:19, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Objections handled via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:22, 24 December 2020 (UTC)

Imperators

• Since the cake appears in AOTC, have you checked the film's adaptations for possible {{Po}}s?
• Please rephrase the BTS to say that the cake was created for the film, and only then mention that it was technically first pictured in the Visual Dictionary. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:23, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Behind the scenes reworded. I've checked the junior novel, novel, and comic and found no mention of any cakes. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 18:28, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Please clean up the BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:31, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
      • I've cleaned it up. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 02:02, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Heh, impressive - you still missed the duplicate word. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:52, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
          • What can I say, I'm an impressive guy. :P JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 15:41, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I don't want to make this a formal objection, since it may not be anything, but should the information in the VD data file be considered to apply to the cake, which is within the data file as well? For reference, it reads: "Regulars at Dexter's Diner debate the degree to which the menu's distinctive 'special recipes' are influenced by Dexter's background in mining sluices and industrial lubricants." The cake is depicted adjacent to the text. Should that thereby indicate that the cake is one of these "special recipes", or is that too much of an assumption? ~ TheTrooperGuy (talk) 21:26, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:01, 6 January 2021 (UTC)