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Ketticus Brayl
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:46, February 18, 2017 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One of the lads.
(2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)
Support
Imperators II(Talk) 13:44, February 18, 2017 (UTC)- —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 13:08, February 20, 2017 (UTC)
- Cevan
(talk) 19:22, February 25, 2017 (UTC)
Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 16:35, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 11:21, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
- Only saw one thing that was a potential issue and on further look, looks solid. Happy to help this one move along. ProfessorTofty (talk) 17:57, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
- Sol PacificusFirestorm 17:12, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Object
SE
Can you clarify that he was surprised she knew who he was? It's a bit vague as is.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:36, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
You can also add that after mentioning his family, she told him to leave her alone before pulling the blaster.Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:07, May 4, 2017 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:36, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
"who came under surveillance by the Transcept Media Solutions company." Can you reword this slightly to clarify that Transcept Media was a surveillance company? Maybe swap out surveillance for a similar word, then change the end to "Transcept Media Solutions, a surveillance company".Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:15, May 20, 2017 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 19:54, May 30, 2017 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to strike objection (EC only)
Supreme Emperor's third objection has been addressed and he's been absent for more than a week. Imperators II(Talk) 19:46, May 30, 2017 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 19:53, May 30, 2017 (UTC)