Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ketticus Brayl

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Contents

  • 1 Ketticus Brayl
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 SE
      • 1.1.3 Comments
      • 1.1.4 Vote to strike objection (EC only)

Ketticus Brayl

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:46, February 18, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One of the lads.

(2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:44, February 18, 2017 (UTC)
  2. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 13:08, February 20, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:22, February 25, 2017 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 16:35, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
  5. Lewisr (talk) 11:21, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
  6. Only saw one thing that was a potential issue and on further look, looks solid. Happy to help this one move along. ProfessorTofty (talk) 17:57, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
  7. Sol PacificusFirestorm 17:12, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Object

SE
  • Can you clarify that he was surprised she knew who he was? It's a bit vague as is.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:36, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • You can also add that after mentioning his family, she told him to leave her alone before pulling the blaster. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:07, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:36, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • "who came under surveillance by the Transcept Media Solutions company." Can you reword this slightly to clarify that Transcept Media was a surveillance company? Maybe swap out surveillance for a similar word, then change the end to "Transcept Media Solutions, a surveillance company". Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:15, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
    • Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 19:54, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to strike objection (EC only)

  1. ECvote Supreme Emperor's third objection has been addressed and he's been absent for more than a week. Imperators II(Talk) 19:46, May 30, 2017 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 19:53, May 30, 2017 (UTC)