Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kelro

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Contents

  • 1 Kelro
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Luca
        • 1.1.2.2 Imp
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Kelro

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 06:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:47, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:03, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 19:46, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:31, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 15:08, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  6. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:53, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Inconsistent referencing for the Trade routes between the infobox and the body.
    • Corrected. DFaceG (talk) 12:23, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
      • There is now a duplicate ref. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 13:05, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
        • Fixed. DFaceG (talk) 19:36, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  • A youmay to Kerlo? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:26, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. DFaceG (talk) 12:23, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • You're missing info in the climate field of the infobox, plus you should also specify there that it had no fauna, flora, or native sentient species. Imperators II(Talk) 12:04, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
    • There is no information provided in the sources for Kelro's climate, or even its native life. All we know is that it was "useless" and a "desolate, searing rock." The bit where it says it has no natural life in the article was technically unconfirmed, so it was removed as well. DFaceG (talk) 12:23, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Yes there is - it's stated that the planet is searing hot - that's temperature, which is an aspect of climate. Also, I see the article's missing a mention of the Lazerians exploring and mapping all the planets in their system. The same, of course, applies to your other nominations. And the "useless" bit should also be reflected. Imperators II(Talk) 12:33, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
        • Added. DFaceG (talk) 12:39, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
          • Context for Lazerians, please. Imperators II(Talk) 12:42, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
            • Context added. DFaceG (talk) 12:45, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:53, 25 March 2022 (UTC)