Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jerus Jannick

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Jerus Jannick

Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:42, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

Objections handled via Discord. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:17, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
Just under the word count wire lol. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:01, March 30 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 16:36, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

~~Please include the full release date for the video.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:52, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:05, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
Helmet Collection 54 includes information about the helmet Jannick is wearing. Per precedent, it should be included in the article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:23, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
- Uniform as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:43, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
  - Added helmet info. I'm not seeing stuff on the uniform—is it in Weapons & Uniforms? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:57, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
    - There's a bit on Page 13. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:07, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
      - Added, thanks for the catch. Paragraph break needed? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:38, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
        Yes, and now you've Jannick's name to Helmet Collection, which doesn't mention him. I would suggest a note a la Crag. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:22, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
        Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:42, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
~~Context for Royal House of Naboo, which will push the word count above 165.~~
~~Is there filming information for the scene featuring Jannick?~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:09, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
- I couldn't find anything in Star Wars: The Making of Episode I The Phantom Menace, and I don't think there's a lacking of BTS information anyway.
~~The uniform note is incomplete; it doesn't include everything mentioned in the article e.g. boots.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:33, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
- References updated. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:42, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

OOM

~~The last bit about Anakin wanting to see Padmé and going to Queen Amidala's quarters should be adjusted to reflect that Padmé was disguising as a handmaiden.~~
~~Links to Palace Guard and Naboo Officer needed. Also, the article could use pipelinks youngling and Monarch of Naboo.~~
~~Date for the Legends card game.~~
~~The link to that Wikipedia list is unnecessary and should be removed.~~ OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 21:45, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
- All addressed, including Discord objections. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:20, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
  - Made a copy-edit; you're lucky it's still at 164 :P OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Per what I have talked about on Discord with your other articles that you plan to nominate, did you check adaptations and sources for Jerus Jannick as well? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:59, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, I remembered to do that before nominating (comic, JN, and novel). JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:10, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
  - Does Star Wars: The Complete Saga have the deleted scene with Jannick? If so, needs to go to his sources list. I know it's not in the sources for the Legends page, but not sure if it's because that set doesn't include that scene, or if it was just not added to sources. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:05, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
    - The scene is indeed there, but I didn't include it in sources because I think it's only put there on Legends pages (released in 2011). I can still add it if there's precedent or something. (I've added it to his Legends page BTW.) JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:45, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
      - From Discord main channel chatter from my asking last month, AV said that's been done for a while. Admittedly I had a different perception, as in 2015, when I had been more active with that stuff, those were treated as just additions to Legends only. But it seems that, since then, things have been different, with those being added to canon articles for quite some time now. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:52, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
        Fair enough then; added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:09, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
Please change the text describing "one of the women" to Rabé. Further, the quote description needs to reflect Rabé being the second speaker for that dialogue. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:28, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:54, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:36, 1 April 2021 (UTC)