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Hort
- Nominated by: Samonic
21:06, 26 August 2022 (UTC) - Nomination comments: First Specter of the Past nomination! Thanks to Hanzo Hasashi for sharing Hort's CSWE entry.
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Support
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 07:44, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 22:48, 5 September 2022 (UTC)- Imperators II(Talk) 15:37, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
Object
Fan
Bastion/Legends's location needed.The final sentence doesn't need to mention Disra's treachery.Fan26 (Talk) 19:05, 27 August 2022 (UTC)- Both done. To be honest, I have no idea as to why I mentioned Disra's treachery. I reworded the final sentence: "Eventually, the council agreed to surrender, and Pellaeon signed a peace treaty.[3]" Samonic 20:46, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
- Both done. To be honest, I have no idea as to why I mentioned Disra's treachery. I reworded the final sentence: "Eventually, the council agreed to surrender, and Pellaeon signed a peace treaty.[3]" Samonic
I would say it's unneccesary to mention that Bastion is its codenameFan26 (Talk) 01:14, 29 August 2022 (UTC)- I left "Bastion," since that's what Zahn used in the Hand of Thrawn duology. Code name removed. Samonic 09:01, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
- I left "Bastion," since that's what Zahn used in the Hand of Thrawn duology. Code name removed. Samonic
" Shortly after, the Moff..." is this referring to Disra or Hort? That needs to be clear.(Reviewing Note) Please see this edit and pay more attention to ensuring proper sentence flow in the future.Fan26 (Talk) 17:33, 29 August 2022 (UTC)- Objection done. Thanks for the copy-edit, I missed that. Samonic 18:06, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
- Objection done. Thanks for the copy-edit, I missed that. Samonic
UberSoldat
Was the abridged audiobook checked?CSWECite need not be employed under Sources if the subject has its own entry per policy.UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:40, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
- I checked the audiobook, nothing. I didn't know about the CSWE policy, addressed. Thanks! Samonic 16:52, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
- I checked the audiobook, nothing. I didn't know about the CSWE policy, addressed. Thanks! Samonic
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:37, 7 September 2022 (UTC)