Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Desolous

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Desolous

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:26, December 26, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Minor spoilers for Episode IX, I suppose.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:39, December 26, 2019 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:43, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 17:33, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 21:33, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
5. Tommy Macaroni 17:18, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• "...had a custom of naming their Sith trooper detachments after ancient Sith such as Desolous.
  The 44th Legion was thus named after Desolous—a name whose true significance remained a mystery to those outside of the cult."
• I would remove the mention of his name from the first paragraph, since the second paragraph expands on the subject mentioned in the first. I also have the same comment on the spoiler template as seen in Phobos' nomination. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:21, December 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Addressed. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:46, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

Tommy

• You call Phobos ancient but not this guy. Is that an actual difference in their descriptions in the book? Tommy Macaroni 12:36, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
  • The article does state this information, only in a different way. I was just trying to vary the wording between the two articles, so they don't look like a carbon copy of each other. ...had a custom of naming their Sith trooper detachments after ancient Sith. The 44th Legion was thus named after Desolous... QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:52, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
• Same date issue with Phobos, you need to link it to the subject. Tommy Macaroni 12:37, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 15:14, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • I'm not entirely satisfied with that, given that the VD uses the Hosnian Cataclysm as the 0 date, not Yavin. I suggest looking at what I did here. Tommy Macaroni 16:48, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
      • Please take another look. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:01, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:18, January 6, 2020 (UTC)