Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Phobos

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Phobos

Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:23, December 26, 2019 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:44, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 17:31, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 21:19, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
Tommy Macaroni 17:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

"Following that practice, the 39th Legion was named after Phobos. Since the history of the Sith largely remained a secret to the rest of the galaxy, only members of the Sith Eternal were aware of the significance of the 39th Legion's name."
I would suggest avoiding the repetition of names within the same short body of text. Also, I don't think the spoiler template applies here since the subject originates from a reference book. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:13, December 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Adjusted the wording. Also changed the spoiler template to the generic one. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:44, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

You need to link the date ref to the actual subject. You may not even have to reference the film at all, maybe "Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker: The Visual Dictionary establishes the Sith eternal was active, and considered Phobos to be ancient, thirty-five years after the Battle of Yavin, which corresponds to the year 35 ABY, according to Star Wars: Galactic Atlas." depending on what the book actually says. Tommy Macaroni 12:31, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
- Reworded. Sorry for the late response - New Years' Eve celebrations have lasted too long for me... QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 15:13, January 3, 2020 (UTC)
  - I'm not entirely satisfied with that, given that the VD uses the Hosnian Cataclysm as the 0 date, not Yavin. I suggest looking at what I did here. Tommy Macaroni 16:47, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
    - Ditto. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:02, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
      - Good work. Tommy Macaroni 17:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)