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Delva Racine

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Support

  1. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:05, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:01, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 00:34, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition specifically says Delva Racine is Human, not Humanoid. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:38, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • May I ask for the specific page in which this is stated?
  • You'll need to include full dates for the film and the Visual dictionary since both were released in 2005. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:38, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • The Visual Dictionary's full release date can't be sourced to the book itself. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Fixed sourcing.
  • Rather then just saying milling about you should specify that she was walking up the steps with another Human patron so people have a better chance of spotting her on screen. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:38, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for Alderaan and Yavin 4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:38, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Can Yavin 4 being a moon actually be sourced to the film? Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Added a source.
  • I'm not sure that the mask and goggles alter the rest of her outward appearance, they just cover part of her face. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:38, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Adressed. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 23:20, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
      • You should also mention her neckpiece and shoe color. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
        • Adressed.
          • You still don't seem to mention the neck piece. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:21, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
            • Mentioned.
  • The name of the Opera House and Squid Lake also need to be sourced to something like Ultimate Star Wars instead of the film. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Based on Gadgets and Gear I think a page for the Delva Racine original hanging sleeve dress can be made since it's a specifically named piece of clothing. The book also doesn't specify that Racine designed it during the Imperial Era or that she got to design it for the ceremony, just that Leia had a dress in her diplomatic wardrobe that had been originally designed by Racine which we know she wore in the film. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Adressed. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 15:30, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
      • You still say that she got to design it in the Imperial Era and don't mention it's part of Organa's diplomatic wardrobe. I'd change it to something like "During the Imperial Era, Princess Leia Organa of the planet Alderaan owned a Delva Racine original hanging sleeve dress as part of her diplomatic wardrobe." Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:21, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
        • Addressed.
  • I think it's also worth noting that she wore her hair in buns similar to those that Organa would later wear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:23, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
ThrawnChiss
  • In canon, human is is not capitalized -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 21:45, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:16, 8 May 2022 (UTC)


Vote to strike objection (EC only)

  1. ECvote ThrawnChiss7's objection has been addressed for more than a week now. Imperators II(Talk) 06:36, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:41, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 07:16, 8 May 2022 (UTC)