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Dagga Farglblag

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:45, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 12:07, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:19, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:47, July 7, 2020 (UTC)
  4. --Lewisr (talk) 03:32, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 09:57, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Sal-Solo's gender and species aren't necessary context.
  • From the second-to-last sentence: "of which, in fact, Sal-Solo had been appointed president by the invading Yuuzhan Vong" Please reword the sentence so this bit about Sal-Solo's true affiliation is a second clause instead of being spliced into the middle of his cover story. Fan26 (Talk) 13:38, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Planet/Legends is linked to twice. Fan26 (Talk) 14:22, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Damn, I added Falleen's context after Ylesia's and forgot to get rid of the second link. Guess it got lost in the shuffle. Anyway, fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 14:25, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast
  • "Sal-Solo himself assumed the name of Ludus Fazum when they were both captured by the New Republic at the Battle of Ylesia during the Yuuzhan Vong War in 28 ABY. Sal-Solo…" Both start with "Sal-Solo", I think it would be better to replace the second instance with something like "Peace Brigade leader" or anything else that fits Sal-Solo's context. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 11:36, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • Good idea, Ben. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 12:05, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • Does The Essential Atlas really identify Falleen as a planet/world? If so, the relevant reference doesn't need to be a manual ref note. Imperators II(Talk) 09:11, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Did you take a second to notice that you've now created two identical references? Imperators II(Talk) 09:34, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • On which page of the Atlas does it say that, then? Imperators II(Talk) 09:35, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
        • Its location and planetary status are detailed in the Yuuzhan Vong War section. Fixed the dupe refs too. OtterSurf (talk) 09:44, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • You should note Marl's reaction to the alias, as evident from the quote. Imperators II(Talk) 09:12, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:29, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • You should specify that she asked Sal-Solo how the alias was even supposed to be spelled. Imperators II(Talk) 09:34, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

  • Leaving a note here: At the 32nd Mofference, we voted to start up a CT to decide what to do with alias articles. If the CT passes, this article will be redirected to Dagga Marl. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:51, July 25, 2020 (UTC)
    • So my work here has been completely pointless, then? OtterSurf (talk) 08:33, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
      • Not at all. Just add whatever you've written on this article to the Dagga Marl one. Imperators II(Talk) 08:37, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
        • Done. Might take Dagga herself to GA. OtterSurf (talk) 09:19, July 26, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:57, September 11, 2020 (UTC)