Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crombach Nebula/Legends

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Crombach Nebula

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:59, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: ...and more

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. NaruHina ^Talk 19:39, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
2. ~Savage 05:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 04:09, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Rubedo
   • Specify its galactic coordinates in the prose.
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • Mentioning Gnaden's death in the nebula should be mentioned.
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
       • I'm sure glad we have the Department of Reduncancy Department. NaruHina ^Talk 20:13, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • Mention that that entry in the Cross-sections was reprinted in the CCS.
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • Specify the CSWE entry in the source list. Possibly mention this mention in the BTS.
     • Specified. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:13, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
2. Imperators II
   • {{SW|url=atlas/index.html|text=''Star Wars: The Essential Atlas'' Online Companion|int=Star Wars: The Essential Atlas Online Companion|archivedate=20090828023841}} should be used in the "Sources" section and references.
     • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:11, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • Imho, something's not right with "The The" in the BTS section. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:22, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • Changed. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • The first two sentences can't be sourced to Revenge of the Sith: Incredible Cross-Sections. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:34, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed.
   • Publishing years of the works should be added in the BTS section. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:36, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added. EAOC has no "real" publishing date. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 08:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

• Even if the Online Companion has no real publishing date, it still came after Complete Cross-Sections; the wording of the bts seems to imply that the two were released at the same time or that they have something to do with each other. Can you reword it so that they're clearly separated, maybe putting Complete Cross-Sections first? Menkooroo 04:47, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:12, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

1. Exiled Jedi
   • I think you should mention the The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia in the Behind the scenes section.
     • Mentioned.
   • Other than that, it's a very good article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:55, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thank you. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:16, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

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