Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crombach Nebula

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Crombach Nebula

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 06:58, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:32, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 13:55, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:15, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 15:11, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:41, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Lucach Nebula
  • I don't see the need of specifying it was located in the galaxy.
  • For clarity, I think it would be better to specify that the battle was fought between the GR and the CIS first and then mention who fought the battle.
    • I did that first, but it was changed around by another user. The sentence was first written as "During the time of the Clone Wars, between 22 BBY and 19 BBY, against the GR and CIS..."
  • "during the battle within the Crombach Nebula," mentioning the Crombach Nebula here again is redundant, IMO. What would you say about changing it to only "during the battle?" LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:10, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Removed the name, but changed it to "nebula" since I think something should be mentioned. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:56, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:51, 27 March 2022 (UTC)