Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bulfus

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Bulfus

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:21, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:11, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:09, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:36, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 14:57, 4 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Needs a species infobox.
• Missing a reference to the Bulfusi's size in the body
• Per the Manual of Style compound terms shouldn't contain multiple links in their first instance of usage, which applies to Core Worlds. You could write it as "Core World planet Corulag"
• Missing links to topics like Parent/Legends, Limb/Legends, Hair/Legends, Color/Legends, Diet/Legends and Atmosphere/Legends in the body. There's a spot where you can link Water/Legends earlier in the biology section too.
• Fragrant means having a sweet and pleasant smell, which I doubt is what you're intending with that usage. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:51, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
  • All done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:37, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Good job, I'll have another look after the weekend. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:06, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Cheers mate. OtterSurf (talk) 12:47, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• In what context does the Prima Guide mention the creature? Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
  • It's mentioned as an indigenous creature of Corulag. Nothing new. OtterSurf (talk) 12:46, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:11, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:24, 8 April 2021 (UTC)