Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Berrun (second nomination)

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Berrun

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:36, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Thought I'd skip Fideltin Rusk's mother for a bit.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR, WP:AST

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:28, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:48, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR (Talk) 17:25, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:54, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • There is an audiobook of Dangerous Games, please check for mention.
  • Quotes must not be linked. On the other hand, since you don't link to either Sergeant or Rusk in the body, you should link those.
  • I'm not seeing anything in either Dangerous Game or the TOR mention that would establish that Berrun was a planet. So please use "astronomical object" or "celestial body" instead.
  • Per long-running precedent, we take the use of the proposition "on" with the subject's name to imply that it was a terrestrial astronomical object. Please reflect that in infobox and categorization, and if you wish, in the body.
  • I believe there is also precedent for referring to the TOR Sith Empire as the "reconstituted Sith Empire", to better differentiate from the original post-6900 BBY Sith Empire.
  • The derivation of the Galactic Games date is too indirect for a simple Reader's Companion reference, please write out a manual ref note instead. And per TERC, it should be 34 BBY instead :P. Imperators II(Talk) 10:16, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)