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Assault (CompForce)
- Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:18, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 145 words (0 introduction, 59 body, 86 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:FFGAMES
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Support
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 10:35, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 13:48, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 15:06, 4 July 2023 (UTC)- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:00, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- Panther436 (talk) 03:08, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
Object
Uber
Please confirm if Imperial Sourcebook also provides a visual depiction for Assault, otherwise the BTS needs to be updated.UberSoldat93(talk) 06:16, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
- It does, it's a drawing of a CompForce assault trooper. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:41, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- Added first narrative appearance as well, which was missing from Legends article. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 17:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
"Members of the Assault subdivision were considered fortunate" I want to verify that the source supports this on its own without it being presented from another entity's perspective.UberSoldat93(talk) 07:47, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- The source says "Those in the Assault subdivision are lucky to survive its harsh training methods." --Vitus InfinitusTalk 13:38, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Sounds like it concerns NPOV. See if what you did on Coalition for Improvements can work here. UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:58, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Reworded but open to more feedback --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:27, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- I'm afraid the issue still persists. I reworded the article further. UberSoldat93
(talk) 10:34, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
- I'm afraid the issue still persists. I reworded the article further. UberSoldat93
- Reworded but open to more feedback --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:27, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Sounds like it concerns NPOV. See if what you did on Coalition for Improvements can work here. UberSoldat93
- The source says "Those in the Assault subdivision are lucky to survive its harsh training methods." --Vitus InfinitusTalk 13:38, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Didn't think this was necessarily an objection, so I left it as a comment instead. The source refers to it as the Assault subdivision and I'm wondering what your opinion of moving it to that name is. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:04, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:34, 16 July 2023 (UTC)