Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Assault (CompForce)

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Assault (CompForce)

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:18, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 19:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 145 words (0 introduction, 59 body, 86 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:FFGAMES

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:35, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 13:48, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 15:06, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 22:00, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
5. Panther436 (talk) 03:08, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber

• Please confirm if Imperial Sourcebook also provides a visual depiction for Assault, otherwise the BTS needs to be updated. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:16, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
  • It does, it's a drawing of a CompForce assault trooper. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:41, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Added first narrative appearance as well, which was missing from Legends article. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
• "Members of the Assault subdivision were considered fortunate" I want to verify that the source supports this on its own without it being presented from another entity's perspective. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:47, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
  • The source says "Those in the Assault subdivision are lucky to survive its harsh training methods." --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:38, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Sounds like it concerns NPOV. See if what you did on Coalition for Improvements can work here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:58, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Reworded but open to more feedback --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:27, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
        • I'm afraid the issue still persists. I reworded the article further. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:34, 4 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Didn't think this was necessarily an objection, so I left it as a comment instead. The source refers to it as the Assault subdivision and I'm wondering what your opinion of moving it to that name is. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 22:04, 13 July 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:34, 16 July 2023 (UTC)