Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Arro

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Arro

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 16:25, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
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(5 ECs/3 Users/8 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 20:42, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 21:04, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:09, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 05:56, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. Loqiical (talk) 12:11, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
  6. ECvote OOM 224 18:58, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  7. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:08, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
  8. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 20:04, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Grid coordinates for Legends astronomical objects go in the BTS. See Gestrex III.
  • There's no real need to say that the planet was located in the galaxy, since it's a given.
  • I normally don't put these ones down, but there are a few missing links. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:36, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please tell me on which page number does GatORW give grid coordinates. Imperators II(Talk) 18:30, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
    • It doesn't, my bad. I fixed the BTS accordingly. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 23:22, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Great, now please go through all of the article and check whether references that currently point to GatORW shouldn't be switched to TEA instead. Imperators II(Talk) 08:28, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
        • Everything else seems fine. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 16:32, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
          • In the infobox, you are still sourcing grid coordinates to GatORW, and in the BTS, you are sourcing the fact that Arro appeared in GatORW to TEA. Both of those need to be fixed. Imperators II(Talk) 16:44, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Could you tell me on which page does TEA mention the Quelii sector?
  • You should be more specific with the planetary type categorization and use Category:Rocky planets instead of the Terrestrial planets one. Imperators II(Talk) 18:00, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
  • "Searing hot" is phrasing used by specific sources in specific instances; I recommend you stick to just "hot."
  • General precedent on status articles, when there's a choice of which source to use for referencing information, is to try and use later-published and therefore theoretically more widely available sources. In this case, TEA (2009 Del Rey reference book) would be more easily available for the reader to check than GatORW (2004 WotC RPG sourcebook), so I'd recommend you switch everything but the first sentence of BTS to reference TEA instead.
  • Please copy over (into both infobox and article body) everything regarding the New Territories from this article, since it also applies to Arro. Imperators II(Talk) 20:00, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • There is no need to say the planet had zero moons. (Precedent)
    • Ignore this, Imperators informed me that we actually do that. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 18:00, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
  • The planet's class is terrestrial.
  • If the planet was made of molten rock, its climate can be considered "hot." (Precedent) LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 17:55, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:58, 2 March 2022 (UTC)